Shadowed Hearts

Description

What happens when the world grows dark?

When violence rises globally and society starts to crumble?...

Who will stand and fight?

Who will do what needs to be done, when the law can't help anymore?

Whill the world turn on them?...

And in turn, will the darkness corrupt them from within?

Foreword

This is my first fanfic on AFF. Suggestions are welcome, and please point out if I make any mistakes.

This is kind of based off of "Oneshot", "Badman", and the movie "Inception", so it WILL BE VERY DARK. Like as dark as "The Dark Knight", "The Dark Knight Rises", ect. If you're innocent, please don't read. This is my usual style, but I do cutesy stuff every so often to lighten it. And please, wait to throw things at me til the end. I love B.A.P, they're my number one group, and this is by no means meant to diss anyone from the group. Like I said, I usually write dark things.

Please enjoy. <3 Thanks for reading!

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shapphire #1 Jul 23, 2014 22:25:01

Chapter 10: Jongup did nothing wrong in my point of view. He's victim! He injured a lot! Because Zelo! (; _ ;) Good thing Zelo came and helped him. But dragged Youngjae and Daehyun along -.- Payback~
When Junhongie put all the medicines, if I were Jongup I would be : *growl* *hissed* "Aarggh!! It's hurt!! Could you please stop?!!" And ended up with wounds being worsen - -"

shapphire #2 Jul 23, 2014 22:24:55

Chapter 9: Eventhough there's HimUp scene, Himchan didn't fully trust Jongup. And this Soomin, I hope Zelo could find her. She is the only one female character that had a big role

shapphire #3 Jul 23, 2014 22:24:49

Chapter 8: *claping* Bravo! Well written, detailed, slow pace that I like, and make the atmosphere lighten up after the raid! Umma-chan is still umma, when Zelo apologized, so cuuu~te~ <3 Daehyun's character though, still food monster XD

shapphire #4 Jul 23, 2014 22:24:43

Chapter 7: I don't know where to start. Amazing. Cool. Unbelieveable. And so many cursing with shiitake on it. Hahaha~ XD Why didn't I know you before, Author-nim? You just-- It's just-- Your action scenes are amazing! So~ Aargghh! Where are the subscribe and upvote buttons?? I'll kick those really hard! Omona, Author-nim~ >,<

First, that Zelo fighting scene! It felt so real, easily to imagine, even I can feel Zelo's pain! Ah~ Zelo-yah, please hang on!

Second, I thought Jongup's appearance would be same like the rest. Had someone died (except Zelo) and joined the group. When Zelo found Jongup, it's out of my prediction! I'm holding my breath! Omona, I never feel want to scream so badly! Here's night, probably everyone is sleeping! Here I'm reading the most awesome action fanfic ever!! I paused for several seconds to process Jongup's condition. Jongupie-yah, my bestfriend~ \(; _ ;\)

The last, when they fleed! Goosebump! Thumping! I feel the action!! Kyaaaa~~ Seriously Zelo's phone! Turnitoffturnitoffturnitoff!! XD

shapphire #5 Jul 23, 2014 22:24:36

Chapter 6: Woot~! Woot~! Tomorrow is D-Day~ Kyung, P.O, B-Bomb and Zico. Wait, are they Block B? Am I right? - -a Junhongie met a girl~ Btw, I'm confused! She called him oppa and Zelo called her noona. So, who's the one older? ('^')a

shapphire #6 Jul 22, 2014 00:08:37

Chapter 5: Ah~ Daehyun is so happy~! And Zelo's parents made me cursed under my breath *gritted teeth* How could you do that to uri Jello?! *furious*
What did they do in TS Entertainment? Training? The last is Jongupie~! *\(^0^)/*

shapphire #7 Jul 22, 2014 00:08:33

Chapter 4: Whoah~ What a show! *clap clap* Author-nim, you made a good fighting scene~! It felt real~ Although Yonggukie was wounded, it felt real~! Mama bear~! \(^0^)/

shapphire #8 Jul 22, 2014 00:08:28

Chapter 3: Youngjae-yah~ (; _ ;) That brain part is eewww~ DX *puke*
Zelo~ \(^0^)/ He's so funny~ (^-^) It means he had grown closer w/ his new hyung~ Glad you have founded new place, Junhongie~ \(; _ ;\)

shapphire #9 Jul 21, 2014 07:20:44

Chapter 1: O-mo-na~! Himchanie's parents ended death together? Did that mean they loved each other so much even the other death couldn't make the other stay alive? Didn't it, did it? Love til death? - - Dark ways btw

I've watched CSI, CSI : NY, CSI : Miami; so I think I would be okay. Also I watched Law and Order, Law and Order : Criminal Intent, except Law and Order : SVU. Mostly : Fox Crime. The polices are nice in CSI and Law and Order ^-^ Haha, I really don't know the reality.

Yongguk ended up killed his step-father. Eventhough his step-father hitting his mother, his mother still loved that husband of her, right? That's why love is crazy. In the dark ways - -

shapphire #10 Jul 19, 2014 21:41:17

Chapter 2: Welcome Zelo~ I didn't read Himchan's part though~