I can't forget her

Description

You and Niel been dating for 6 months. You met His Mother and.......... you never talked to Niel again

 

 

I Love Niel! He is my favorite out of Teen Top! That is why I write about him! If this sounds intresting plese read my story then! :)

 

Foreword

Characters-

Lizzy (You)-

Funny, Everyone likes to be around you, Nosy, Fun, Smart, Dare devil sometimes, 17

 

Miranda-

Lizzy's bestfriend, Likes to shop, rich, nice ( only to her family and Lizzy ), Hard to get along with, 18, protective

 

Niel-

Charming, good kisser, Nice, Doesn't like to fight (with girls), Has an older sister, Protective, 19

Eu Jung-

Married, 22, hates her brother but protects him, Lived in korea for 15 years, and lives in Amerca for 6 years, Niel's older sister 

 

Teen Top-

No Cap-

I Do Not like CAP Period. It's True so Most of my Stoires will not have CAP Sorry! 

Comments

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angelenavang #1
Sorry! This was my first story, and I wan't really good at it. But thanks for the advise and everythign and I am 12 years old.
Zoie-Nielsbaby #2
Chapter 5: Ok Im not being mean I just giving advise never do this kind of lay out unless you have detail and a lot of voice
P.s. how old are you???!!! (sorry if that sounded mean but seriously)
P.p.s. othere than that' it's fine ^__^
Lemlouma
#3
Chapter 6: Well...somehow there is something that bothers me about this story...
I'm sorry but this story is weird.
It's a bit unreal.
Don't know how to describe, sorry :(
But it's alright ^_^
so please update soon <3
sakura803
#4
Chapter 6: New reader :) hope you update soon. The story is really good^^