One Last Goodbye, 6 more Hours

Description

welcome you!


Tao, age 20

Kris, age 22

After breaking up a month ago because of the I-got-bored-of-this-relationship situation, Tao and Kris both walked into different directions, but after this one month Tao asks for one last afternoon, for one last walk to their favorite place, the beach. He begs for this last goodbye, for these last 6 hours before they could eternally be finally apart.

That day Kris was able to remember again all those feelings he kept hidden. All those feelings he was afraid of. And as he starts regretting for the day he broke up with Tao, it is already too late for him to make up for this mistake. His time is up.


Okay! So here I am again with another Taoris one-shot of mine ^^ This idea popped in my head today. I went to school and we didn't really have school because of some strikes and blah blah blah. What I want to say is that I had some time to sleep again and I always listen to music so I can fall asleep easier! So, I put a song to play and while listening to it and to the lyrics, a scene was created in my mind. I so wanted to write this scene, describe it with as many words as I could, but I had to make up the beginning of this, the how it started. So I am here now, with this one-shot story that was created by a small scene into... what it is xD I hope you are gonna like it ^^ Please subscribe, and comment a lot! Upvoting is optional :)

This one-shot includes:

  • Sunsets
  • Walks along the beach
  • A heartbroken man
  • A confused man
  • Sickness
  • Kindness
  • Love
  • Affection
  • Drama
  • Tears
  • Beautiful Words
  • Singing(dafuq uh? xD)
  • One character's death

 

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exo_traitor
#1
Why is my name in the description
Purple68 #2
Chapter 3: I love this story.. I finally found it after not finishing it.
skylaryse #3
Uhm, hi, can I ask you about the description because i think there is some problem what my computer and i cant read it. thanks
lemon-deulop #4
Chapter 2: Ohmywhat?!
This was such a lovely update. I just want to huggle with Kris right now, the poor guy. And Tao-- the poor baby!
This was such a lovely piece, I enjoyed this very much.
Thank you for completing it. yay~
ToxicInsanity
#5
Chapter 2: Omg I really love this story!! The situation is completely sad but so gripping, and this cliffhanger ugh >__< I cannot wait till the next part! Hopefully updated soon(:
lemon-deulop #6
Chapter 2: When we think about it; time sure goes quickly and flies by. I can just imagine what Kris will feel when he'll know what's really happening. Tao is going to break his heart, after Kris broke Tao's... This is so sad. ;-;

I just want to huggle with them both.
let's huggle, you and me, okay? [:

/huggles you, should you want to or not/
ancho10rhythm
#7
Chapter 2: its sad so sad ~ its a sad sad situation ~ kris will regret everything he was done when he broke up with tao T^T
JongKey1214
#8
Chapter 2: Noooo a cliffhanger!!! Plz don't make Tao die plz plz plz!!! Make then fall in love with eachother for real this time!!!! Plz I will start crying if Tao dies !! TnT
daifuku98
#9
Chapter 1: Ah, it really is wonderful, BTcup! Thank you so much for this angsty and great one-shot that was too long for an actual one-shot, haha! I'm starting to like them together... ^^
SelcyMorimoto #10
Chapter 1: I need an update pls author awesome nim.... jaebal~~ looking forward to itt