this isn't really rated but a between heechul and siwon. i do not own the story it is from a friend who doesn't want to make a aff (lazy kid) credits to: vanillasky.
Foreword
Late night calls apparently help Heechul fall asleep!
This story is so adorable, there seriously is not enough sichul around ! (well, there's never enough sichul XP) I had a fun time imagining Heechul in Siwon's shirt, and it was just too beautiful.<br />
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Can I just point something out ? You seem to sometimes make mistakes concerning the 'a' and 'an', while there's an easy rule to remember which you need to use. When the next word starts with a vowel, you need to use 'an', an eg from the story : 'an innocent guy' instead of 'a innocent guy'. When the next word starts with a consonant, you use 'a'. Like 'a boy' ^^ I just wanted to say that, because I noticed a couple of errors concerning it.<br />
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Also, near the end I think you once said 'know' when you meant 'now' ^^
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