Overlap

Description

Yongguk can't distinguish between reality and his subconcious. 

 

Writing this story for Jindeul's Writing Contest as suggested by the lovely CindfrogBlue <3 

Title: Overlap 
Genre: Angst, Romance 
Pairing: Banghim 
Prompt: Nu'est-Hello (very, very, very loosely based)
Status: Complete
 
This story might get a tiny bit confusing, so if you have any questions, feel free to ask, I'll be happy to answer ^_^

Foreword

Himchan trailed kisses under Yongguk’s jaw, each sloppier than the next as he searched for the hem of Yongguk’s tight black tee. “Release me…” Himchan breathed against the crook of Yongguk’s neck. His feline eyes narrowed as he pushed Yongguk backwards until they reached the bed. 

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MollsLeMouse #1
Chapter 1: Oh my god! I never expected that ending!
I feel so sorry, Himchan was dead and Yongguk keep thinking he was alive. I love it so much <3
brownrice #2
Chapter 1: You honestly have a way with words and the ending definitely surprised me. It was very well written and I hope that you win with this contest entry!
syaf_AKTF #3
Chapter 1: OMG what a good story author-nim.I was shocked for the ending. It's just perfect. You will gain your gold for this. Good job ^_^
strangeneko #4
Chapter 1: Ohmygod T-T
He's in the mental hospital T-T
Ohmygod T-T
Really really good great amazing awesome perfect whatelse T-T
KAZEYAMaru #5
Chapter 1: OH MY GOD so sad !!!! **thumbs up**
CindfrogBlue #6
Chapter 1: .... I went speechless by its perfection. Like... it felt so real and Yongguk's character was beyond my imagination and I didn't expecting the ending would be like that and I was panicking when Himchan drown Yongguk and when Jieun came that was when the reality hit me and oh he thought Himchan was there for three years and OH Himchan is dead three years ago !!! (ok, I was desperate and imagine I spoke this in one breath like a rapper).

Oh god please let this story be the winner T^T
TrinTrin #7
Chapter 1: Omfg no. That was too perfect. Like no seriously stop with this perfection asdfghjkl.
I loved the way you structured it omfg, like I knew something wasn't quite right from the beginning but I was not expecting that ending holy fish sticks.
Hope you do well in the competition! Good luck~
Eloraci #8
Chapter 1: So incredibly heartbreaking. I can't stop crying.....
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