Chapter 1: Ah this is so bittersweet. The switching between the past and the present allows us to see Myungsoo and Sungyeol's relationship grow and then it's cut short. Beautifully written
Chapter 1: hey you! hi. hi again. /don't mind me being awkward and all/
see, here's a thing. i thought i did read this in the past. and of course i did (like a passing apparition, i leave no trace).
and another thing is, fate is funny huh? i thought you're not the Pistachio that read my stories because I'm in denial that someone like you did read my pieces.
and (other thing is) because i realize, after our small hit me bak(s) on other place, after i 'hear' your voice outside of your story, i realized that i reread your story with this new voice in my head /of course i won't read it out loud lol, my mom would think i'm a kindergarten's teacher wannabe/ and it does still give me tears, i mean, yeah i tried to be macho or role playing sunggyu's dry guy persona but tears did welled up and not to blame you or anything but take that as a compliment, please do.
Chapter 1: I said I would comment my overflowing feels one day and so here I am after re-reading this story. I love the idea of the past and present. It wasn't confusing at all and the use of '?' to identify the dream was really good. I shall start from the top.
The beginning is really good. I've always thought idols probably have all gone through the period of self-doubting, wishing they hasn't debut. Especially for our boys who had worked extra hard since debut. </3
It was a rocky beginning but because it's infinite, they held it through. :')
Gosh. I always have a soft spot for those scenes like the guy went back in time and had to watch history repeat itself without being able to stop the tragedy. T-T Poor Myungsoo... )':
It's like plot unfold in a BAM when Myungsoo shouted, "Don't go, Yeol. You'll die."
Towards the end, the bit whereby Myungsoo and Sungyeol shared a walk and talk, it felt very much bittersweet. It's like they were given a 'second chance' to hear Sungyeol's last words. But the moment he told Myungsoo to let him go, I felt my heart being squeezed )':
The way you ended with the past extract of Sungyeol giving Myungsoo his autograph on his eighteen birthday speaks volume.
I can never describe characters with seasons and I think you've done it beautifully. :')
I think this is one of your most well-written stories, truthfully. <3
So you should quit being lazy and write more *winks*
I feel that this story is the kind of story you'd like to read.
This is a compliment, by the way. :p
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