Chapter 1: Omfg, this is stunning. Your writing is so fresh and amazing, I love it. You should use capital letters though, this amazing fic deserves to look as good.

Chapter 1: sad and sweet at the same time :"___)

Chapter 1: this was brilliant, thank you! especially "Taemin comes and goes like the wind"

Chapter 1: This was so sad but also beautiful. Poor Jongin!