Chapter 4: you should continue this story.. its interesting.. hehe.. gudluck authornim..fighting2 ya ya ya!! update plez.. Π.Π

Chapter 4: Some of you, not everyone is fluent in english like all of you people below. Saying her english is . If you don't like it, you don't have to read it.

Maybe through this way (writing a fanfic) she will improve her english. If there any error in her english, just tell her what she need to fix.

Btw.. "are indonesion" ? So far as what i have seen, many ppl asking a question like "are you indonesion" ?

Yeah your english is so perfect ...

Chapter 2: good idea but poor english. it seems like you used google translate. please check before post.

Chapter 1: are indonesian? but sorry I must say it....ur english is

say about chapter 2

another gbom story, yea yea yea ^^

Chapter 1: Annyeong! Welcome to Gbom world... another gbom writer... keep it up...update more often...kekeke... thank you for making this story...kamsa hamnida chingu...