A Fairy Teal

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My sister's first story.

Pleace tell me what you think of it.

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Beautygirl #1
Chapter 1: IT's good but it needs a bit more explanation. I feel it was a bit rushed but ovarall good. I also thought this was the prlouge and their would be more, oh well great job on your first story.
aokikumiko #2
Chapter 1: mmm ithink its good but the story is too short....
i think this is the prologue., hehehe
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