Part 1: If Only They Knew (Zelo and You)

Description

Hey guys! This is my first story! Well my first B.A.P imagine story for you Zelo and B.A.P lovers out there. Please enjoy, comment and requests are always welcomed!  :) Hope you like it!

I really did try my best >.< please let me know what you think!

Foreword

This is my first story you guys. I hope you like it! Please comment and feel free to give me some suggestions.

Please be nice though. :)

Author's Thoughts
KPOP_MetalChik94
making a few corrections to the last two sequels!
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Exotica94 #1
I LOVE THIS STORY! so cute! <3
ZeloJenni4ever #2
Chapter 6: EEEK! I wonder thats the plan!! Can't wait for the next chapter! HWAITING! :D
Bubbystories #3
Chapter 5: Its reallllly good I loved it sooo touching and sweet to read
Mariele #4
Chapter 4: Ommmmmmg!
You're such a good writter!!!!
I really loved your story! <3
I'll keep an eye on you,cause I don't want to miss your next fanfic!
Xoxo
v_JayB #5
Chapter 4: awwww.. soooo cute ending Zelo *mesmerizing*

anyway story line really good.. at first I didn't get the thing with you getting influenced by my writing skills.. haha the love story.. where the girls likes someone else but is in a relationship with another guy *got it*

I guess that's why I like the storyline.. haha anyway..

thing is that.. I don't like this stuff.. with POVs its not only in your story.. but I am actually never reading this stories with POV I only get confused.. haha..

I think for the first story.. you did really good.. if you compare yours with my first.. (if you want to know it Looking for Mr. Right)
your quite.. better!! but now I am going to edit.. these stories.. because people keep complaining about the font thing.. aish.. this .. -.-
ZeloJenni4ever #6
I fell inlove with your story!
snowphonix #7
Chapter 3: Please make more
Ah-Mih #8
Chapter 1: Awwww... That was so sad... I wish Zelo would have told her... Awesome story by the way! Good luck! :)
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