Chapter 4: Tour

A kind of LOVE

Beach is near to their place it’s like 2kilimeters distance also the market it’s just 4kilimeter away

but mountain is 20kilometers

 

Mean: “ hmmm what if we go first to the mountain? Kim?(looking at kim on the driver’s seat)

beach and market is near to our place so it will be more easy for us to be home before night.

We can actually walk unlike in the mountain, if night comes, it will be hard for us to come

home it’s 20 km distance, it’s kinda dangerous down the road”

Jane: “you have a point  in that mean”

Kim: “okei then mountain first”

Mean: “good”

                                On their way to the mountain (mean is in the right side of kim and jane is at the back)

Mean is busy feeding kim a piece of bread and a sip of juice alternately coz kim can’t eat.

She have to concentrate on the road.

 

Jane POV

Over!!....why she needs to feed kim like that…kim can eat later after driving or maybe a stop over.

This is my car I should be the one sitting beside kim. I should be the one feeding her giving her a

sip of juice.h m….p!  (mean interrupts)

 

Mean: “jane do want some?”

          Some of kim?(giggles) –jane thought  “no thanks”(looking at the view on her window)

“….ohw! were almost here guys. Look! There’s the mountain I used to played with my cousins”

Kim: “where? Where?”(look at jane at the back to see where jane is pointing)

Mean: “kim! Focus on the road it’s dangerous here”

Kim: “aw sorry mean”(pout)

Jane: “were here now”

 

                They all go down. Get the camera and took shots of the scenery with them alternately….

Afterwards…..

                They all sat down to feel the air,the view,the grass,tree,clouds,everything..

 

One day I will bring the one I love here…- kim thought promising her self

 

    Hour and a half past they decided to go down the mountain for their next

Destination.

 

The Beach. Like in the mountain they all go down the car take pictures with different poses….

Kim is about to click the button to take picture of mean and jane , but jane is in shock to see

Someone, a familiar face not that far to their place.

 

Jane: “PIE!... PIE…”(running towards pie hug her) “I miss you my friend. How are you?

It’s been a while ….”

Pie: “I miss you too. I’m fine, as always.”(chuckles)”how about you, you looks

More pretty and y?hahaha”

Jane: “ofcourse I am.hahhahah…..oh! I forgot, I will introduce you to my classmates in

chiangmai”

 

                while walking heading to kim and mean.

Jane(puts her arm to pie shoulder) “I’ll tell you something, a secret. Can you see that ……

the one who’s wearing black”

Pie: “uh…yeah..”

Jane: “I like her”(giggles)

Pie: “like her?!? What!”

Jane: “yes.she’s kim”

Pie: “yah. I know her name already we met yesterday”

Jane: “ah.. that’s why….nah…..what do you think? She’s cute right?”(giggles)

Pie: “E….Eh..”

While kim and mean busy with their pose(jane interrupt)

Jane: "guys. I want you to meet my cousin. Pie this is mean. Mean this is pie.

Pie this is kim..kim th…."(kim interrupt)

Kim: “hi again pie. How are you?”

Pie: “I’m good”

Kim smile at pie…. With the thought of short tempered still.hahahah

 

         Hi again? Again? Since when? Why your always surrounded by beautiful girl kim..grrr. –mean thought.

Jane: “aw. Pie.. where going to the market, can you come with us? Let’s tour our new friend here.”

Pie: “uh…ahm…”

Kim: “nahhh..kill joy. Come on..”

Pie stare at kim

Kim is laughing inside her mind. Hahahaha.

Jane: “please pie. We can bond again.”

Pie: “okei wait… I ask mom permission first”

Jane: “yehey!...go  go. Maybe sometime I’ll visit auntie. Please say my regards and also that

I will visit her one of this day”

Pie: “okei”(running, heading to their house)

………pie came back

Pie: “okei.let’s go now”

Kim: “okei have a sit now and put your seatbelts girls..”

Mean and jane: “yess boss”(teasing kim)

 

                In the Market

 

Walking,look around… walking. Until they reach the pet corner of the market

Jane: “pie. Remember this? You always love jellyfish. ”

Pie: “yesssss. I have one but unfortunately she died a week ago”

Jane: “aw! So sad…you can bought new one now or try other animals”

Pie: “hmmm. I don’t feel like buying today maybe next time. I’m not on the mood”

(smile at jane)

Kim: “guys are you hungry?”

Mean: “I am!..let’s find something to eat”

Jane: “ow! Yes .. our friend van have a restaurant nearby. Right pie?”

Pie(awkwardly respond): “uh…yeah.”

Jane: “aw. Is their something bothers you?”

Pie: “ahmmm none.hehehe”

Jane: “are you sure?”

Pie: “yes I am.hehehe”

 

                                Ahmm. When my jelly fish die I feel sad but van is their for me . He comforts me

…..also a unexpected confession of his feelings to me... He wants to court me but..

I didn’t allow him, It’s not that I don’t like him …uhhh…I can’t explain. Arggg. And maybe jane it’s better

If you don’t know the story coz I’m 100% sure you’ll tease me and van… and that would be more

Awkward  –pie thought

 

Kim: “so… we can go now? I’m deadly hungry”

                They all heading to the restaurant. And when they arrived.

sign it’s good that van is not here. –pie thought

jane: “where is van? ”(while looking around)

kim: “uh. Can we order now”

while eating…

jane: “pie are you busy tonight? I want to have party”

pie: “sure… why not?”

jane: “good.  It’s an overtime.”

mean: “party! Great I love party. I’ll cook for you guys”

kim is busy driving. “I guess we have to drop by to the nearest store here? I’ll buy drinks”

mean: “yes. We have to buy beers and wines. Woohhoooo! Party!”

kim go out in the car went to the store. Jane accompany her after getting all this needed for the party they go back to the car…

kim: “pie we will drop you to your house so you can prepare your things for sleep over”

pie: “okei”

                arriving to pie’s place

pie go out in the car…

pie: “bye bye”

jane: “see you later”

pie: “aw. What time?”

jane: “hmmm”

mean: “about 9pm, I have a lot of things to prepare. I think 9 will be okei”

jane: “don’t worry mean. I’ll help you”

mean(smile): “of course you have to”

pie: “okei bye now…”(glance to kim)

(kim just wave her hand and give pie a sweet smile and wink)

 

At janes house

 

Mean and jane get all the thing they will be needing for cooking and they heading to the

kitchen while kim parks the car afterward she go straight to their room .

Kim: “I got so tired driving for you ladies I think I’ll rest for now”

Mean: “ehh…hmm okei”

Jane: “we will wake you up later sleepy head”

Kim: “byeeeeeeeeeeeee.”

 

 

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gLumbuffoon
#1
Chapter 10: Oh no more update.. Please don't end your story like that..Please update soon..
priyankatha #2
Chapter 10: Hi, please continue to your story. It's a good story
joker92 #3
Chapter 10: Author plz update...:-):-):)
hayley123 #4
Chapter 10: Hey author....what happen? Waiting for your update. Please
alracstar #5
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ICJ123 #6
Chapter 1: Love the format- "Name of Character: statement". I understand that format is not easy to keep up when the story gets long. Keep up the great work and in my opinion, your English is good. Please update more.:-)
blackhello
#7
Chapter 10: I love your story.
But I'd love it more if you're organized it.
If you need any help, tell me :D
octopushover #8
Chapter 10: Thank you for the update!
If I am in Aom's position, I will be jealous' hahaha just kidding more chap please? ;)
alracstar #9
Chapter 10: I will change the name of PIE to AOM..
I got confuse with PEI and PIE. wahaha sometime I wrote the wrong name like in this chapter 10,when I'm typing I have wrote PEI but it's actually PIE... It's really PIE in here. but for kim I think I won't change her name here. It's cute. :) but maybe.. I change it too. thanks for reading jub jub jub mwah!!!