Kai : I love you and please be my angel. Taemin : I'm sorry,please dont go and i need you.

Description

Hello guys ~ this my first fic. And sorry for bad english..i'm really at writing because english is not my first language at my country but i try make it best! 

Minzy :- 17 years old was married with Taemin.Minzy such a pure kind and loving person.Even Taemin hate her but she always be strong and love taemin.Long ago,she such a happily kid but when she lost her brother,make her become lonely,quiet person.

Taemin :- 18 years old,he such a cute handsome guy but already married with Minzy.But he never threat minzy as her wife.He threat Minzy as a maid.And he already had a girlfriend,Sulli.He such a playboy and he from a richest family.

Kai :- 18 years old.He was taemin's bestfriend.Sometime he being a playboy but he had a kind heart.When he first met Minzy.He falling in love with Minzy but his heart broke when know that Minzy is belongs to Taemin.But he always threat minzy as good as he can.

 

what happen when Taemin knew that Kai had a feeling for minzy? did their relationship will broke?

p/s : sorry for bad english..i'm bad at english! oh! my english really ..please forgive me if i make wrong.. <3

 

Foreword

"minji-ah,i love you..will you be my angel and rest of your time with me?"

"i'm regret it what i do at you..but please dont go..i need you..really i am"

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Shroomies123 #1
Chapter 5: DAMN Taemin is a B.I.T.C.H!!!!!!! She better end up with Kai, seeing how Taemin is treating her.
striped-cat #2
it's okay if English is not your first language. writing fics actually can improve your English! Ps do you want an editor
TaekookieLuver #3
Chapter 5: hey..how dare taemin do that att minzy...stay strong minkky..huk3..
oh..ur eng better now! good job! so update soon <3
Daesungoppa4ever
#4
Chapter 5: Taemin, why so mean :'(
On a side note, your english is improving authornim! Keep up the great work!
azndramafreak #5
Chapter 4: No this is really good. Keep it up :)
YukiAnggrainiKato #6
Chapter 4: ok update soon <3
TaekookieLuver #7
Chapter 4: haha..bodo lah kau nie :P
aq komen bhasa malaysia je laaa...:P
anyway,english kau teruk...
tp ok laaa jln citer kau...puiii :P
ILoveMinDragon17 #8
Chapter 4: I haven't got the chance to comment but I have read the chapters your story is good and I'm happy your making the chapters longer on your English its also getting better update soon :D btw I want taeminzy