Chapter 1: Oh come on! I do love you guk, but if I were Channie i'd be all over T.O.P as well?! there's nothing like y T.O.P? lol .... well ok, now to the real review!
I liked this first chapter, the concept of Chan writing fanfics is not new, but by adding other bands (at least mentioning them, just like you did with Big Bang)gives it something different. I like that!
ps: i loved the whiny boys waiting for their food, it was cute ;)
I'll be waiting for your update!
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