Your Mom made you to a girl school thinking there was going to be no boy there but she was wrong untill you meant Ren. Thinking he was a girl too being happy hanging out with ren Untill one day you found out he a boy will you go a tell the head master or keep it a secret
Chapter 3: Again, the same thing here. Same mistakes, the narration and the dialogue Need to be Split, you should do it like this:
"Class was about to start but before I thought I should say something to that pretty girl next to my best friend.
-Hi - I said taking sit.
-Hello - The pretty girl said to me, I can tell she's kinda shy, not at all but still, she is."
You get it? That way is so much easy to us (to read it). I hope you don't get mad or angry, 'cause what I really want is your improvement.
Chapter 1: Okay, first. You really need to split the dialogue. Make sure also about correct your grammatical and orthographic mistakes. The name of the fic is wrong, it should be: "You're a boy", no "Your a boy", that don't make any sense. Also, chapters should be a lot longer than this. Please make sure to think about this and improve, I think the plot is so nice and good, and I really want to read it, but like there are so many things wrong, I have to let you know. Have a nice day and please update soon.
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