You Ruined It

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Living a fairly normal life was easy-peasy for you. With dancing as your passion, you needed nothing else.
But goddamnit, one person just had to ruin it all, and he goes by the name of Kim Jongin. 

Foreword

Author note:
Ahhhhh sooo I did another thing! I decided to post this up and wallow in my self pity. This'll probably be a twoshot, haven't decided how I'll ruin this thing yet, but hell. 
Thank you guys SO SO SO much for liking my other story, 'Sides'! I FEEL LIKE YOU GUYS ARE MY BABIES OR SOMETHING. I can't even imagine someone even liking my stories. BUT SERIOUSLY, thank you!!
 
 
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_haneulee #1
Chapter 2: This is such a fun read and I love the way you depicted the characters especially the girl's side. I'm not a person who is into dance but reading through this kind of gives me an impression of how people who take pride on dance feels. (And Kai is soooo fit for his role in this three-shot) I would love to know what happens next tho, or Kai's side of the story. Ah and I also loved the mention of Baby Don't Cry (I even halted for a moment and played it then proceeded back to reading lol)~ that'd be all, I'm blabbing a lot. XD hope to hear more KaiOC fics from you in the future. Hwaiting!!! ╰(*´︶`*)╯♡
PennyB912 #2
Chapter 3: Super cute and fun read :)
Chanpuppy #3
Chapter 3: I guess dancing is one of your hobbies, right? Maybe I'm wrong but the way you depicted it through the character point of view make it seems like. The character is funny, she seems so laid back and oblivious type (I loved the way you showed how oblivious she is, so oblivious that she didn't even know she was lol) but then when a foreign feeling hits her she just seems to lose it. The way she reacted to the kiss was refreshing, because we are often used to have a girl who would be still, slap the guy or just run away, so her punching him made me smile. Moreover, the strong personalities of her is something I fancy very much because too often female leads are dully portrayed, they too often appear as weak beings in need of protection. Oh and special mention for Baby Don't Cry, I relished that part, even reread it with the music as BGM. I think I'll stop here before I exceed the limit again. Another great story from you!

PS. I am kinda curious about them, like if she ended admitting falling for him.
PS2. And Kai... Needless to say you did great portraying him, I could totally visualize him.
noonanoni #4
Chapter 3: so cuuuute. cant stop smiling. ㅋㅋㅋ
ExoticShawolinSpirit #5
Chapter 3: Oh my gosh my feels!!
gorgeouszhang #6
Chapter 3: Did they know each other before the 'seat incident ? how come it goes so smooth for jongin go get into her lifeㅋㅋㅋ cute and fluffy tho... love it! ♡
rupanzel #7
Chapter 3: Awwwwww cute and sweet good job ^^ ♡
JRustina #8
Chapter 3: Oh my god, it was so cute ! I love how she just can't stop hitting him haha
fyeahkkamjong #9
I LOVE THIS SO MUCH T T THIS MADE ME FELT MAGIC. THIS FIC IS SO MAGICAL I WANT TO CRY I WANT KIM JONGIN
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