Final

60 Seconds

" Hello " Jieun greeted .

 

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0:05

 

"Hey ! What are you doing ? Say something . " A voice echoed through the phone .

 

Jieun's face hardened , trying to catch up the real situation .

"Who is it ? " Nara who was sitting beside her , asked curiously .

"I don't know ." She took a glance at her phone's screen . " It's public phone's number . "

"Woah , " Nara's jaw dropped . " It's dangerous , you know ? Is it a guy ? "

Jieun shrugged . She don't know neither . She only heard a guy's voice that she believed it's not belong to the one who called her . 

 

"H-Hello ?"

 

0:12

 

Ah , it's a guy then .

 

0:13

 

"How old are you ? " the guy asked .

 

0:15

 

"Errm ,," Jieun changed a gaze with Nara blanky . "Sixteen ?"

 

0:19

 

"Sixteen ?" Nara repeated her friend's word . " Are telling the we-don't-know-who your age ? "

"He asked me . " Jieun replied innocently . But when she thought about it again , she don't know why she answered the guy's question . "Do I know you ?"

 

0:27

 

"No . You don't know me and I don't know you too ."

 

"Hey , Jieun ! Do you know that you are talking with stranger . He , based on what I heard from your talk ,  might be a serial-killer , who knows ? You really got me shivering for nothing . " Nara make a fake trembling with her body .

Jieun also didn't know what was she doing . She could just hang up the phone call but no , she's not . She have the feeling to continue the conversation .

 

0:37

 

"How about you ?" Jieun broke the silence between her and the guy .

 

"Huh ?"

 

0:41

 

"Are you an ahjusshi ? "

 

"Pfftt ! "

 

Wow , his laughter sounds cute .

 

"I'm same as you , sixteen . Why ? Am I sounds too old to call an ahjusshi ? "

 

Jieun smiled .

 

0:47

 

"No . " Jieun responded . "Just asking ."

 

"Oh , look at her . Like those couple when they're on the phone~~ " Nara teased and elbowed her hardly all of sudden . " Just hang it up , can't you ? We don't know who it is . "

"Ouch , it's hurt . " Jieun patted her stomach .

 

"What's wrong ?"

 

"Huh ?"

 

0:50

 

"Nothing . " Jieun glared at Nara . "Just friend of mine . "

 

"Friend ? " 

 

Jieun blinked . "Yeah . Why ? "

 

0:53

 

"Can we ..." the guy stopped .

 

0:54

 

"Can we be friend ? "

 

Friend ? with a guy ? Jieun thought deeply . There are many guys around her but none of them is her friend . She doesn't have a friend of guy . She's really cool towards guy that's why most of them don't have the feeling of 'friend' with her . They have crush on her .

 

"Why don't you just say yes to one of them ? It's really disturbing to have such many eyes on us , on you ! "

"I don't have the feeling towards them . " Jieun replied lazily . She , too , tired of those wild-eyes .

"So , make a one . "

"Huh ? Make a feeling of romance ? " 

"Yeah . " Nara noded .

"But , how ? "

"Just be friend with some guy . And , the feeling will started to sparkle without you know it . "

 

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Maybe , this is her chance to have friend of guy . It is not dangerous , right , to be friend with a sixteen-years-old-of-stranger ?

 

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"Okay ."

 

1:00

 

Tut , Tut .

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blackpirate #1
author-nim?is it really end like this??
unbelievable!unpredictable! but,cute though.hehe..
Umaimah #2
Chapter 2: I was rereading the story ,
you have some grammatical errors in it
like "Am I sounds to old to call an Ahjussi?
It should be ' Do I sounds too old to be called an Ahjussi?'
Umaimah #3
Chapter 1: nice one , blythe ...
I did not expect the plot to be this good ,,
But since you're the almighty blythe star , it's not a surprise then.
Aish , I'm losing without knowing ....
Afi .... WAKE UP !!!
nice one there *wink*
There's some spelling error . - relationship and playing . That's what I found .- You typed too fast , I guess?
Btw , fighting !!!
SistAu
#4
Chapter 2: nice. yet simple.
but, he just hung up after she said "okay"?
that's quite... improper.
Ayaka_Misaki
#5
This sounds interesting! :) < 3 Please update soon!
aerith_cloud #6
Chapter 2: yah, make a sequel la~~~ it end just hanging like that... btw, nice story!!
aerith_cloud #7
Chapter 1: who is it??? update soon~~~
SistAu
#8
Chapter 1: 'Hello.'
I like the idea too.
ShineeBlack #9
I like this idea, update soon, neh? ^^
nectardivine #10
This seems nice, I'll be waiting for you to update it ^^