Look At Me.

Description

"Rin-ah! Can you ask Youngmi what is wrong with her? I'm worried"

Why did you never worry about me?.

 

"She's so close, yet I feel like I can't reach her"

You're so close, yet I feel like will never reach you.

 

"Wae, Rin-ah? Why did she not realize that I really, really love her?"

Why did you not realize that really, really love you?.

 

"Aish, ottokaji? What should I do to make her look at me, Rin-ah?"

What should do to make you look at me?.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Foreword

Hey guys! Seventy7 here! Well this is my first attempt at writing a fanfics. I'm kinda new at asianfanfics so I kinda confused how to use it:/  It's really short but here it is!

This story is in English. Well, english is not my first language. So I'm really really sorry at my grammar mistakes. so bear with me kayy^^. I'm open with any critics or comments, as long its stay positive (you know what i mean right^^).

I do not own  Kris or Exo (I wish I do), but I do own the OC and this story. It's originally from my own idea (or base on a true story to be exact). So, If there any similiarties from other story ITS ALL COINCIDENCE. Please don't plagiarize or anything. Thank you. 

For now, ENJOY! *bow* 

seventy7
4 Des 2013. i decided to write a sequel:D But right now I have some exams soo...I probably will start to write the sequel next week. Please bear with me D:

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mymilkyu
#1
Chapter 2: needs a sequel? Yes definitely. I preferred chaptered ones, since it can make that dragon suffer more. LOL. But one shot/two shots would be awesome too. :D
And I vote for Jongin. Heh. He's just the perfect boy to mess Mr. Dragon's mind. XDD
anyway~ I'll be waiting~! :D
justkeepitjuicybaby_
#2
Chapter 2: SEQUEL PLEASEEEEE ;;
Neighbourhood96
#3
Chapter 1: i know girls with slightly deep voices and it sounds pretty hot... even though i'm a girl... XD
sihuilurvskpop
#4
Chapter 1: what's sequel??
mymilkyu
#5
Chapter 1: Oh my goodness.. You can't just end it like that author-nim.. Sequel please! :D
bring in another handsome boy who loves Rin the way she is, and being extremely honest about his feeling for her.
Let's make that dragon realize that he's soooo wrong! LOL
anyway good story~! XD
naeuineko #6
Chapter 1: Wow, this is good even though you said it's you first...
Such a heart-breaker story. I wish Rin would change and has confidence on herself more.
KwonBoa723
#7
Chapter 1: a sequel please, let kris know what he did wrong >.<
syaheerah #8
Chapter 1: sewuel please ^^ author-nimk
make him realize his mistakes ^^
merr0398
#9
please do make a sequel.. any type of ending would do and just make kris realize his mistakes...