Sixth Time The Charm

Description

In which Kyuhyun laments the ineffectiveness of his right hand and Yesung is much better at planning romantic rendevouses. 

Foreword

 

Kyusungcentral

fest

 

Its common knowledge that I at things like this, but for the love of Kyusung I tried for some fun. I don't think this is what you wanted to read Nana, but it was fun to write. Thanks everyone for supporting Kyusungcentral ^^

Entry # 5

 

Title: Sixth Time The Charm

Author: midnight

Pairing: Kyusung

Rating: PG 15

Prompt : 5 times Jongwoon and Kyuhyun try to have [and have it fail epically] and the 1 time they successfully have y times

 

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TheFanFicHoeX
#1
Chapter 1: OMG THIS IS GOLD <3
Hahahahahaha Kyukyu... the frustration... I can just imagine LOL
Hilarious!
Shirano #2
Chapter 1: Hahaha this is hilarious!! Poor kyu but at least now he wont have to worry anymore
siana-chan #3
Chapter 1: I always read you fanfics midnight, and you know that I was so earger to read some from you someday.

So today I'm the happiest fan ever in the world, yeahyeah :D really it was... AWESOME!! actually no, there are no words to describe it but... You're definitely good at this (sorry to tell you lol ! In case you still think you're bad at that..).

I was kind of sad you didn't write the lime part, I'd rather read the fanfic with just lemon (hot & rubbing and touches) than knowing there is full but cannot have a glimpse at it, kinda makes me feel frustrated xD

The scenes were really intense and hot and.. sweet oO yeah, you did it in your own way with your very own characters that we know, so we still see them as a cute and awkward couple, even when having (or trying to lol) having . It's passionate and y so.. I really think you can write more of it :)

It is kinda strange to go from a really awkward couple from your past fanfictions, to somewhat touchy chars, to, erm, . I'm sorry I'm really picky, but it's just that it's been years I've been waiting for that, and I sorta more expected for them to 'grow' the need of each others, to start touching themselves thinking of each other, then touched the other intimately, even undress him, and more and more every new fanfiction.
Well imo it's not too late, you can create the 'before' of this fanfic, to how they came to this situation :p *saying non sense, sorry again*

I love your work, that's why I'm expecting a lot.

<3 midnight! Thanks a lot!!
thursday #4
Chapter 1: you finally did it. lol. but it was still cute and adorable and lovely. A+!
AllSpecialSmile
#5
So yes, today I had some time for reading and commenting ! It's been a while, I know :/
I just wanted you to know that I still read your fics, and I feel like you're improving day by day, Naz :D this one was nice (different, ok, but still nice xD) and no you don't at things like this !! I know sometimes you feel down when it comes to what you write, but you surely don't have to. Because what you write is always amazing. You have a great style and I'm sure a lot of people love your fics. And the Kyusung you imagine is...♥
I've been a bad reader recently because I tried to focus on french fanfics and other things...but not even once I've forgotten yours, nor all the things you've done for Kyusungcentral. I thank you for your great work ♥
nuvolosa
#6
Chapter 1: hahaha..lol i'm dying...XD
oh...poor u my babykyu.....
laughing so hard when they're try to having in car... Omegosh! hahaha..

great! it was fun...
thanks for sharing~~^^
kyusung hwaiting!
ice420 #7
Naz you are such a tease!!! Poor Kyu :( Kyu should have left it to Yeye ^^ The practice room? It's a disaster waiting to happen!!! Car? with their height? And Hae.. the biggest er there is :D Kyu can't get mad at Hae, really. He wouldn't dare *lol*
turtlestarcraft413
#8
Chapter 1: excuse you for being so awesome .. like seriously .. ammpp .. thanks !