Chapter 3: Hi this is so beautiful! I love how you express their emotions and thoughts with such beautiful words. I really enjoy every bit of it, but there’s something i’m confused in chapter 3, where wh imagine himself if he ever found a wife to settle down and get married, why he only imagined the scene with a wife and refer them as her when he already fell in love with a boy, also he already called him with pretty name so i just don’t understand why you write a very specific pronoun there as if he only wants to marry a woman in the future. Nevertheless the story development is so good i love it!
Chapter 2: argh! when was the last time i read such an intelligent story? ah, i have one in my subs list, but a woohyun x oc fic, nevertheless, still intelligent, deep and worth reading!
i love how you tackled "experience". i have my head nodding while reading that part, that's just the way i see "experience" is! experience is the best teacher but we don't have to experience something to learn from it, someone else's experience will do! and yeah, how they react to those experiences are the most important lessons!
Chapter 9: I'm glad to know that you gave a lot to pore yourself into this story and let out your emotions in a way it was beautiful and really felt gentle to read it was hard to read it in a way of acceleration like it was full of exclamation marks but a gentle read of understanding and I really loved it theres not much fics with this kind of tone but its still very great in a way!
Chapter 9: This is so beautiful. The way you phase words and write this story is really admirable. This story gives me a fuzzy feeling and reminds me of a beautiful sunset like in kontrol mv... ^^
Chapter 9: This is written so beautifully and the ending's perfect too <3 I love how you describe everything, it's so beautiful and meaningful, kudos! <3
Chapter 9: Thank you.i read this when i'm going through major emtional harships ..and for the couple hours i was devouring it i found peace ..you're so talented .
Like you i hope i can find my new begining :) i'm hopeful for once
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