My Withering Golden Leaf

Description

Luhan waits at her bed side everyday in hopes that her eyes will open. Over come with agony, and grief, he replays the most defined memories of her in his head, as if they were reality, as he prays for her to come out of her coma. But will she ever?

Foreword

I was feeling extremely angsty, so here it is!

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Kangaroooo #1
Chapter 1: Your writing is really great!
The way you convey your words is fantastic!
The title is interesting, as well!

I find it a bit hard to read the paragraphs.
There are too many words.
It would be nice if you can sort them out into another paragraphs so that it will be easier for the readers. Spacing is important, too.


Thank you for sharing this with us.
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