I Won't Give Up

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And just like them old stars

I see that you've come so far

To be right where you are

How old is your soul?

 

 

I watched her destroy herself to pieces, ruining every reason to smile I ever gave her. I watched helplessly as she slowly faded into nothing but sad memories, a constant reminder of my own failure . . .

 

But I wasn't going to give up . . .

On her. On myself.

On us.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

(*A/N: This story is written from Yixing's P.O.V.

And also, please check out my other LayxYou oneshot, 'A Beautiful Mess': http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/434537

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Foreword

 

“What is wrong with you?!” I tried screaming at her, but one look at her scared, trembling eyes, and I swallowed all my necessary ire.

Her body remained still—only swaying back and forth every now and then—except for her trembling fingers and wild eyes, avoiding my gaze.

“What is wrong with you?” I repeated in a whisper this time, gently holding her shoulders to keep her from falling over.

She simply shook her head and said nothing, pressing her lips together in a thin line to stifle another sobbing fit. But I clearly saw as her fingers squeezed themselves shut around the pills she held . . .

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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RukawaHolmes
#1
Chapter 1: What is it with you and ponds honey XD

On an actual note- wow... I swear I got chills, so wow. Its a very visual, beautiful story with an excellent flow. The best part it you can feel everything in this story. Keep it up sis. You're great at it ^^
xingcamfan
#2
Chapter 1: i got goose bumps... beautiful... TTuTT
nikiiiichan
#3
Chapter 1: okay. i saw the title and i thought "Jason Mraz? no, can't be" but i clicked on it anyway and saw the description/foreword, and i just had to read this. and thankgod i did, because this is beautiful. i love Jason Mraz. Thanks! I love this story!!
MetuSa #4
Chapter 1: A *very* nice oneshot. Glad it ended well.
ManidiLira #5
Good idea, Updatee! ;u;