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In which: Myungsoo is the time thief and he steals other people’s time to live a bit longer. Suzy is a stargazer and they communicate through the night sky.

(And the longer he lives. The quicker she dies.)

 

Prompt: " an enchanted ring" for 1/3 Enchanted Writing Contest

(so late ;__; /cries i apologize)

 

 

A/N: & Thanks to so many various people for fueling my starry night feels

Here are the character posters:

 

 

made by my wonderful kdrama/exo buddy rikstal

thank you dear!

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louieistrash #1
Chapter 1: GAHD YOU WRITE SO WELL. THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THIS
dukkuu #2
Chapter 1: I wanted to read this for the longest time but I put it off because I was busy but I regret that so much this is so great ermahgard.
Honestly everything flows really well together and the picture you paint with words are really really vivid and fluid and I envy that and in my gosh you're great
aeterniti #3
Chapter 1: this story is beautiful omg with the writing style and everything. i love the imagery and thought you put into the words along with ending because alsdkfjalksdjfalsd /cries/
also, just wanted to let you know that i recommended it on my thread as well!
http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/401739/
Pistachio #4
I can't believe I only read this now.
It's like you've weaved the entire night sky together with the story.
It's so, so, so beautiful. ;~;
smolder #5
Chapter 1: i remember reading this awhile back while going through the contest entries but i decided to reread it after seeing you mentioned by eris.

oh
my
god

BRB CRYING WHY IS THIS SO AMAZING SERIOUSLY
you've rendered me speechless and just wOW
my heart felt very heavy while reading this (does that mean it's important eue) and when i read "And after all, tomorrow is a new day and a new night, and you don't need to live forever to appreciate the beautiful little things in life. (Because maybe in the end there is nothing except the beginning.)" i began to tear up. it was really profound and beautiful.
you also made me appreciate the stars, especially with the video you linked in the beginning. (i mean, i've always thought stars were beautful but never more than right now.)

dUDEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
i want to frame your writing and put it above my desk. seriously.

omf i feel like i'm going to embarrass myself if i keep talking so i'll just end with a
YOU'RE AMAZING.
summerdaisies #6
Chapter 1: omg. perfection.
ohsueweetie #7
Chapter 1: This fanfic is just so flawlessly written~! God~! I wish I can write like you~! LOL~!
ethereals #8
Chapter 1: NYSHAAAAAAAA WHAT IS THIS THIS IS SO PRETTY OMG. AND STARS AND YOU AND EVERYTHING ABOUT THIS LDKSJFSDJFDJSLFJDLSFJLDSF.

it could've been more coherent bb but this is pretty much me right now so sorry.

Back to the topic: Firstly, there are some format mistakes, like the question "do you like the stars" is HUGE. or is that deliberate? Anyhow, I loved how you described Myungsoo as the thief with heart, and he was so sensible here /o/ And Suzy was also pretty nice ^^ I liked the way you've written this and also how you've incorporated the constellations with it. Also, on a side note: I was almost Pisces rooting to come, and I thought of my pretty ot7 when "infinite" was mentioned. hehe.

WHATEVER THIS IS SO PRETTY OMG.
patheticdoll #9
Chapter 1: you created your own mona lisa through writing this masterpiece :D A brilliant piece of writing, and I just want to say you are one of my favorite author in this site :D:D:D I'm really looking forward to see more of your brilliant work!
devilgirlmaria #10
Chapter 1: finally I got around to actually reading this and GAHHHHHHH IT'S TOOO MUCH PERFECTION I have so many fave lines but you know already how much I love color




"there are spectrum showcases and black skies folding into cerulean blue and brief shatters of celadon like summer radioactivity"



"two star lusting delinquents hanging onto colors bleeding purple scars and lunar blue waves across a black canvas"



*SOBS* and there is just so much more that I love about this <333333333
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