Chapter 1: Awww...this was just....too many feels.X3 and that wedding....sobs*
Ok, i wanna clear it up first, i loved every second of this story and you wrote it really well and it was really sweet. But i'm not so sure if people can be let out of hospitals so fast when thy're in such a bad condition, nor if doctors can know how fast a patient recovers, especially if it's life threatening injuries such as broken ribs. Which, if i'm not mistaken, take at least a month to heal (it's actually more than that, probably). But don't take this as me trying to be critocal of your story, please. It was really cute and i love you and all so just trying to help, ok?:)
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