Great story

HUAHHHH!!!!<br />
Its cute yet a happy storyy!!! my eyes were teary anyway~ hahaha!!<br />
can u make one for me with jonghyun? 8D kekekekke~<br />
keep up the good work!

LOL. Sorry. I was trying to make it more Korean. <br />
Won't do that next time.<br />
I am brainstorming another idea. Involving MinHyuk now.

Woots ~ Not bad for a starter ~<br />
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Juz one small thing(s?) :<br />
You mentioned all oppa, dongsaeng and noona here, it made things pretty confusing since 'oppa' means elder bro (for a girl) and 'noona' meant elder sis (for a guy), sooooo who's older in the story? Jungshin or you? XDD<br />
And another thing (yeah I know I talks alot), Jungshin isn't the maknae of the group laa, that's Minhyuk wei ... XDD<br />
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Anyways, it's pretty nice and even though I think the title of the story sounds pretty non-related XD, do write more in the future! :DD<br />
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and and and! Add me too! XDD<br />
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-- Deb