Hello, as some of you guys might know, this is my not so new story which was deprived from my first ever story, Come Back To Me. Some might be wondering why I'm writing a new story along the lines of my old one or whatever and the reason is because I felt my first story was too mismatch and the plot was confusing and it wasn't that exciting. So there's my reason/s.

Now because I'm kind of rewriting it so that the plot would be easier to understand and it's more exciting, I would be grateful if any of you guys could leave me a comment on how I should kind of execute this story. So you can read my previous story and tell me what parts I should change and not. I want to try and make a story which appeals to all you readers. Enjoy and please give me feedback (:

Disclaimer : The main photo is not mine but merely a photo I found while searching the internet. All credit goes to its original owner. Thank you.