specks of silver

Description

 

Sehun is starting to realize that dreams can only be reached by painful realities or not reached at all.

 

 

Foreword

I'm trying out a new writing format—hope you like it c:

Enjoy~

 

Excerpt (part one):

 

i.

It’s four in the afternoon with both the full moon and the sun somehow hanging in the sky amongst the clouds when Sehun first catches sight of Jongin. Staring at the fairly tall figure lying on the gravel, he feels it—the sort of indescribable pull similar to the way the moon revolves around the Earth. Everything about him is flawless: the way his body is built, the way his face is structured, the way his dark hair falls just above his eyebrows over his tanned skin. Sehun thinks he’s a work of art that should be preserved.

 

 

So past the sound of sirens, past the chatter of bystanders, the crushed pieces of metal scattered across the freeway, and the deep red that covers his face and body, Sehun can’t help but just sit there and admire what he wants his forever.

 

 

 

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thesmartass
#1
Chapter 1: I really loved this story; your writing is quite beautiful
The ending though... such a heart breaker.

LIKE WHY?
hyorilover #2
Chapter 1: bravo!! nice story :)
wishful
#3
Chapter 1: Commented over on the lj post. c;
wishful
#4
AFF USER BIIANCAZ NEEDS TO STOP BEING A LITTLE S. MAKE HER GO AWAY. PSH. HOW IMMATURE OF HER. COMMENTING MULTIPLE TIMES IN THE SPAN OF A FEW MINUTES.

ONLY LOSERS DO THAT.
Miiil_ #5
dude. awesome.
idiosyncrxtic
#6
SPOTTING AGAIN TO PISS JESS OFF
wishful
#7
eveN THOUGH I'M NOT THE FIRST COMMENT, AT LEAST I WAS THE FIRST SUB. OTL OTL OTL.

Still not over that second paragraph of your excerpt. -insert dramatic sigh here-

Super excited for this, Tiff! ;D ;D ;D ;D
idiosyncrxtic
#8
OHMYLORD THE IS JONGIN DOING LYING ON THE GROUND COVERED IN BLOOD AND .

I WILL YOU UP OMG