PayBack part 2

Love at first sight

Nara: Amy I don't think u should do this

Hedra: Ya Nara right

Amy: guys i'll be fine no one ever thought of this before

Slam!!!

Hye Jung: oops my bad

Amy: ahhhh

Sunhee: omg who is that

Hedra: Amy you okey?

Nara: lets tke her to the nures

Yoosun: he's so cute

Nara; WHAT ARE YOU TALKING ABOUT!!!! (turns head) he's so cute

Hedra: Nara a little help

Nara: oh sorry

Chris: what happened over there

Jin sa woon : I know what happened

Chris: what?

Jin sa woon : the girls there think I'm cute

Chris: thats why one's on the floor

Jin sa woon: Maybe I'm so cute that she past out

Chris: ahh

Jin sa woon : I must go my cuteness is making the girls pass out bye chris

Chris: bye?( walks over )

Hye Jung: guy's he's coming act cool

Shinee: that mean Nara, Hedra go away

Hedra: how an we go

Yoosun: I don't know just go

Amy: what happened

Chris:is she okey?

Hye Jung: hi

chris: ah hi

Amy: you again come on guys I'm fine

Chris: what do u mean you again I came to see if your alive

Amy:well now you know (walks away)

Hedra: Thanks

Nara: Heres my number

Amy; Nara

Nara: coming bye

Hye Jung: thank goodness there gone my names..... ah hello

Chris: (I now that girl but from where) (walks away)

Hye Jung: what!!!

 

 

 

 

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sunyoungster
#1
Chapter 10: -____________________________- you realize im the only on reading this right.
sunyoungster
#2
Chapter 9: LLLLLLLLLOOOOOOOOOOLLLLLLLLLL WHEN CHRIS SAYS: It was oops I STARTED DYINGG
sunyoungster
#3
Chapter 9: Oh my favourite part is in this...
sunyoungster
#4
Chapter 8: PAZZAAAZZZZZ
sunyoungster
#5
Chapter 5: well its longer but u still need to put some PAZZAZZZ in it
sunyoungster
#6
Chapter 4: i love it so far but ur chapters are way too short try to make them longer by putting chris and amy in the same chapter hehehee