First day (Chris li)

Love at first sight

Chris: (Its been 11 year since i saw that girl and since my umma died from canser and now i starting jr. high) (thinking)

Dave: Hyeongje

Chris: will i get picked on

 Dave: Hyeongjie

Chris: will it be hard (thinking)

 Dave: Hyeongje!!!!!

Chris:(falls on his bed falls on his face) owwwwww  WHAT!!!

Dave : Moring :)

Chris: is that all u had to tell me ?

Dave : Ya

Chris : u couldnt have tapped me like everyone would do? (Said in a mad voice)

Dave: No it's not fun like that i like seeing u get hurt

Chris: i love u to  Hyeongje

Dave :k go eat the bus will be here soon

Chris : did appa come home late

Dave: ya hes asleep dont wake him

Chris : k( ever since umma died appa has to work two jobs so w can have food and so we dont lose our house)

Dave: hey u ok ?

Chris: ya im fine

Dave : good cause im going to take the last apple (runs for the apple)

Chris: no your not ( runs grabs the apple first and eats it in front of Dave)

Dave : your mean ( he said in a funny )

Chris ; love u to hyenogie

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sunyoungster
#1
Chapter 10: -____________________________- you realize im the only on reading this right.
sunyoungster
#2
Chapter 9: LLLLLLLLLOOOOOOOOOOLLLLLLLLLL WHEN CHRIS SAYS: It was oops I STARTED DYINGG
sunyoungster
#3
Chapter 9: Oh my favourite part is in this...
sunyoungster
#4
Chapter 8: PAZZAAAZZZZZ
sunyoungster
#5
Chapter 5: well its longer but u still need to put some PAZZAZZZ in it
sunyoungster
#6
Chapter 4: i love it so far but ur chapters are way too short try to make them longer by putting chris and amy in the same chapter hehehee