The Bitter Sweet Coffee Taste

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The Bittersweet Coffee Taste

Yoona is just a normal highschooler, until she meets Donghae. A new life is upon her

Foreword

It was December 20, 2009. “Your child is dead.” The doctor said. “What? How?” the mother asked. I was just a little girl. I didn’t know anything. I was in a pink dress waiting for my brother. It was our birthday. People could tell us apart. Slowly we both fell down to the floor. Tears these tears were just flowing through my eyes like sour candy. My sister had died. This was when I realized love isn’t worth anything. Love isn’t worth the time. It just breaks your heart. If you do find the love of your life it hurts the same if you aren’t in love.  

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Shanny_887 #1
Chapter 10: WOW !!
thank you unnie !!!
fighting!!
are many updates, many thank you very much
I like too this story
I wish the best for this story
LUCK!
please update son !!
unfixed-soul #2
Chapter 10: I am not trying to be rude or anything, but the uppercased letters and how the words are bolded make the story very hard to read. And I really think you should separate the dialogue. I am pretty sure that in books when people talk it isn't clumped up together. Now I used to be like you, I wrote my very first story like this, but then I deleted it afterwards because I felt a bit ashamed of how badly it is written. But now my stories are better, they're are easier to read. I have more subscribes and comments than before. I know I am not the best writer, but I try to be. And I think it's better to hear this, well not hear but whatever. I think it's better to hear this so you can improve, read more books. When you don't know how to spell a word, look it up.
The dialogue should be like,
"I really like pie," she said.
Not like
"I really like pie" she said. "oh yeah me too" it makes it really hard to read.

In all the books I have read, and this is also what my English teacher taught me. Make sure when you are writing the dialogue, place a comma right before the " before placing the " unless you are using ? or ! or the period. And the word after " should be lowercased unless it's a name. For example,

"Oh my goodness! I love cheesecake," she exclaimed.
or
"Oh my god!" she yelled.

Sorry if I am bothering you, I am just trying to help you become better. And I am not trying to be rude, so don't act (excuse my language) y to me for helping.
Shanny_887 #3
Chapter 4: oww !! ><
thank you unnie !!
please update soon !!
I love it story!!
figthing <3 !!
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