Curse Of Fate

Description

How does one cope after the loss of your only love?

Is it possible for life to continue as you thought it would forever?

Or would the world you know come crashing down?

 

 

 

Foreword

 

“It is human nature. Why is it that there is no such thing as a Utopia, where everything is perfect?

Simply because we, as humans, would not allow it.”

 

 

 

 

A.N: This is my first time trying to write a oneshot, so bear with me if there are grammatical errors annd spelling mistakes! (though they are most probably typos...)

In all honesty, I only wrote this for a school project, but I thought it would be nice to share it with the rest of the AFF community.

 

Let me know what you think about the story by commenting as it would be great to hear some constructive feedback.

 

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pmhenslow42 #1
Chapter 1: OMG, I really loved the imagery of your story. And yes, now I agree that it is pretty sad. :( I loved how you narrated the story. In a way, I was pretty bummed that it already ended because you made me want for more. :)
crazy4dkfan #2
Chapter 1: Jie Jie, you nerd... Wait till I see you after the holidays...
xNostalgia #3
Chapter 1: This was very pretty. It was short, yet very descriptive and powerful. It almost feels like the beginning of the end, as if the story is finished but, still unfinished.
I like that you used 3rd person because you out the reader or me (lol) into the story and I could picture it happening, which I love.
Don't change how you write. And if you decide to write another make it a little longer because then people get more involved and it leaves a greater impact.
(^_^)/*
Awww I loved this ~
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