Chapter 3 The twins

School Life

Ding dong! ding dong! ding dong!
the twins arrived the at the door. Rapidly i ran to hide from them.
"Hi auntie Jane!!" they squeeled
"ahh hi jane long time no see. how are you hope we didn't cause too  much troble" Aunt Jasmine invoked trying to catch some air.
"They can be such a handful.."she panted franticly
"Well i made some tea care to join"
"Ooooh that would be lovley are you coming ellie and cellie"
"NO were going to see cousin clare!"
"Errrm actaully clare is at ballet now" Mum intrerrupted because she could see that i was trying to climb out the window.
"Oh isn't that lovely which one does she go to??"Aunt Jasmine questioned
"Errrrrm you know the the one with the teacher with the tu- tu hair??? errm... whts that name..aaah yes Madame tu tu's"
"Oh i heard of that one i heard their really expensive and have the finest teachers"
"Yes now come along our tea's getting cold"
See that's the reason i like my mum she quick thinking and smart.

 

 

                                                                                                                              

sorry its a short chapter guys!!
 

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Sandbreeze2061
#1
Chapter 3: The fanfic is really good so far and I see something bright in the future. I am even new in here and I am trying to read as much stories to get better. You have a good start.

Some critiques is maybe practicing making the chapters longer. :)
OrGiNaLiTy #2
Chapter 1: This fanfic is really cool I'm loving it!!
it relates to real life events!!
hwaiting! :) <3
OrginalGirl #3
Chapter 1: please can I have any tips to work on or any feedback this would be much appreciated!!! <3
OrginalGirl #4
please enjoy!