The Way We Were

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What a great power, love is.

But if you look closely, love makes you vulnerable.

Love is nothing but weakness.

 

 

Foreword


Prompt: Evening Sky - Ailee

 

Whenever I give someone my heart I have a habit of saving the half

I hate the foreboding that if I give all of it he would just leave me

 

The words that I didn’t say yet to you remain in my mouth

The love that I didn’t give the whole remain in my mind

 

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ｇｉｖｅ ｍｅ ａ ｙｅａｒ. ¦ » A Writing Contest

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Wilde_sparxx #1
Chapter 1: I started this to see how it would play it out ...
I think the journey makes it worthwhile and feelings do stay but I suppose perspective changes... or maybe the birds chirping outside my window at this ungodly hour are meddling with my already muddled mind! lol

Anyhow it was a great read ... I've now read a few of your one-shots ... and I like the way your stories are presented. Things are not always said but perceived through actions ...
codenameclumsy #2
Chapter 1: Just found and read it :) It's beautifully written, Authornim! Even if there were not much conversation, I could imagine how they interact with each other :) Good one!
yongseoshipper #3
Chapter 1: so sad!!! =[[
Iceahri #4
Chapter 1: This is so amazing!!
I like the bittersweet ending. :)
kimmm314 #5
Chapter 1: I like your writing style though you minimized the of dialogues, it is still understandable.
smtiseo #6
Chapter 1: I like your writing style and i hope you make a squel for this. It was bittersweet really, I hope seohyun finds her happiness as well and she's not afraid this time.
soshi5 #7
Chapter 1: uhm ! it's a good oneshot , but a bit complicated on the level of the writing style , not to much dialogues and a bit ... uhm i don't know how to say it , the writing style is very nice and unique but it suits a novel more than a oneshot about yongseo but stil i really like it and i would like to ask for a sequel please ??? it's too good to end just here , you know they're obviously love each others but end up separated and the reason behind them being not together is kinda unreasonable , so please a sequel , i will die for one
keep up the good work
fighting !
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