All Your Ghosts

Description

Eight months after Luhan's death, Jongin is still haunted by the boy's ghost. Meeting Kyungsoo shouldn't change anything, but it's not long before Jongin finds himself wanting the boy and struggling between his dead love and this boy that just might care for him, too.

Foreword

-------

this is something i wrote a few weeks back

it's quite long, but it's something i am very proud of

i hope you will like it as well

thank you

Back to Top ↑

Comments

You must be logged in to comment
LeeJuLian #1
Chapter 1: Oh my Gosh, I'm going to have trouble expressing how much I loved this.

It's sad, but not overly sad. I mean, I had tears in my eyes at some parts, but I didn't cry so that's good, because once I start crying I'm depressed for the whole day :'D

There are some little things that I particularly enjoyed, like when Jongin grabs Kyungsoo's scarf. I could almost feel the fabric under my fingers *^*
Or when they talk about buying stars for the ceiling. It sounds like they want to buy dreams, to buy something that they /can't/ buy normally, but... Argh, this is so hard to explain xD

Kyungsoo is just great in this fic, and Sehun too :)

I also relly like the fact that Luhan seems to be looking after Jongin and Sehun (and maybe even Kyungsoo), especially at the end, when they're at the cemetery. I totally imagine him floating in the air above them and smiling and laughing with them even if they cannot see him and - oh my Gosh I'm so weird x'D

Well, I'm definitely upvoting this one too and...congrats, you're a wonderful writer :'D ♥
Jishubunny #2
Chapter 1: I really like how Luhan seems to be with them the entire time even though he's dead the whole time~ I really like Sehun's role here too~ I really like how he just seems to be there for Kai as a friend~ how they grieve and cope with each other with Luhan's death~ Kyungsoo's prayer was touching~ I'm sure Luhan is a happy ghost wherever he is~

Lastly, I hope Sehun got a boyfriend~ XD
MerywantsanInterlude #3
Chapter 1: This is really beautiful <3
vheissu #4
Chapter 1: Ahh~ this was great. Just the right amount of melancholy and fluff.

Keep up the good work! :3
Sayoko #5
Chapter 1: Q____Q Do you want to kill me, like really...
I totally didn't expect this story to be so... beautiful, but it really is...
The end almost had me crying, but I stayed strong!!! haha
It's so sad, but then in the end it's happy again, but not the happy happy, more like the sad happy where you want to cry and you're sad because it's so happy... You know? XDD
There was only one little thing I didn't really like, but that could also just be me: I don't like the word "ing / to " to describe this kind of action xD It did fit at the parts where Jongin was kind of upset, but when he's talking about how it feels like yesterday to him that they met and stuff... I would've preferred the words "to make love" or something XDD
Apart from that, I really loved this. Really did~
Please keep up the good work :33
minime96 #6
Chapter 1: This is one emotional story. Love it! Good work!
Back to Top ↑