a day in the rain

Description

HEY THERE:) its my first fanfic so hope you guys appreciate it although it may not be as good:)

HI CHARLENE

rate if you can:)dedicated to one of my closest,truest spasm buddies

Foreword

a day in the rain was the last thing you could hope for to happen.your umbrella had been blown so hard it broke and you were there, stuck in the rain.hours passed and the rain showed no sign of stopping.time passed as you stood there, helpless...

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gangnam-royalty #1
Chapter 2: This is a great fanfic so far! ^_^
You have some capitalization issues, but I'll let it go because even though it's only the first two chapters, I am already in love with you writing style and fanfic ^_~
I will be waiting for your update!
P.S. who is your favorite between the twins? Mine is Youngmin! <3
wishedhopes #2
Chapter 2: you........ cliffhangers wow omg i'm 499% done right now you can take your time writing the next chappie okay!!!!!! lOVE YOU
wishedhopes #3
Chapter 1: IM SCREMAINFR SNSKXJSKAL Thank you so much omg!!!!! update soon alright, i'll return you the favor tomrorow!!!!