EXO OTP Lay-Out ~ (My New Friend)

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I believe the title speaks for the description, but since I could't put any more tags this story also contains
mostly fluff and a little ~

Foreword

Hi, it's me again!

I've been wanting to write an EXO fic for so long, but I had no idea what to write!
So now that I finally had an idea for one, I wanted to post the foreward and stuff ASAP!

So yeah, my idea was that I would just post cute little oneshots of each OTP; not something super long, just one chapter be about each pairing ~

All in all, I really hope that you guys like this one, and make sure you comment and tell me what you think~
I'm really excited! :D

-> Sorry for changing the title all of a sudden; I just realized that it doesn't go with the 'flow' I'm trying to create, so I thought I should change it. Sorry about that...



/ please no silent readers, i want to hear from all of you❤ /

 

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narutoxseme #1
Chapter 3: xiulay was just adorable
wildvines #2
Chapter 3: aaaaahh xiulay u w u)
that was really cute and turned out better than i expected!!

it was realistic and the way you portrayed the chsracters was great. :D (especially the waitress hahahha i liked her!) minseok seemed witty here?? it was probably the way he interacted with han ri. :-) oh, and i liked how you added that tidbit with his parents and luhan. it really added to the realism!

(*slams fist on table* how dare you kick your own son out of the house!!! no one does that to kim minseok!! or to anybody for their ual orientation!!! *angrily takes a bite of my apple*)

yixing was definitely cute here! with his worries and nervousness going up stage. and daaaaayum! guest chef zhang yixing! the image in my head is pleasant i think he'd look really cute! u wu i also liked how he was checking out minseok!! hahaha because c'mon, it's /minseok/! (plus he's wearing /white/. *wolf whistles*)

the ending was fantabulously nice because ///cooking time with the chef/// *wink wink* [insert erted cuisine jokes]

oh and that tiiiny little detail about minseok's eyebrows might've been my favourite because he did have quite bushy ones! of course, not anymore because sm shaped them thinner. /laughs/

with or without (i was a little dishearted haha), this story was great! i'm sorry for any repeated words?? any mistakes in this comment because it's almost 7 in the morning and i haven't had sleep yet (hey, i'm on a break). and i'm also on my phone. (and aff doesn't have spell check on phones. i'm not sure if they have it on web as well but *shakes fist*)

:D
SammiCass #3
Chapter 2: Ah man Tao. Author why did you do that? I literally hit back and threw my phone! That'd if it happened in real life but I'd've done this:
Kris: Why are you crying?
Me(Tao): Becaue you taught me to dance?? Anyways, nice story! :)
Kpopstalker101 #4
Chapter 2: Poor tao, i really like this story, please update soon^^
Mira5Hero #5
Chapter 1: 잘한다, Lexi dongsaengie~ can't wait for your next chap.
qveenly #6
Chapter 1: This is just sooo cute~~~
Kpopstalker101 #7
Can't wait for the first chapter
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