The orphaned girl

Description

Oh Jinae, a 17-year-old orphaned girl whose parents that died in a fire when she was only six. Her parents sacrificed themselves just to save her. Now she were still living in an orphanage, no one would adopt her because of that horrifying scar at the left part of her forehead she got from the fire. It made her ugly. But she still thinks she's pretty as Miss Korea. Even though she were kind and sweet, no liked her because of that. Beauty is all that mattered in the world now. But she didn't care at all. As long as she had a friend, just one friend, she would be the happiest girl on earth. Yet she grew her hair long until her waist so no one would see the scar she had.

She agreed to become caretaker at the orphanage until she was adopted, the salary was reasonable too. The other kids who were orphaned would play with her and they didn't care about the hideous scar. They liked her. They liked her so much that they didn't want her to leave. She cooked for them, read them bedtime stories, watched kiddie shows with them like Barney and friends, played outdoor games or went to the playground with them and even sent them all to school before she went to hers.

One day, while she was playing with the kids at the playground, someone decided to adopt her. She was elated, joyful, excited. Nothing could describe how happy she was. Yet she was sad because she was going to leave all the other orphaned kids. She wondered what would happen to them once she left. Would the halmeoni there be able to take care of them herself? Will the kids miss me? Would they become a caretaker like me? All these questions ran through her thoughts.

She didn't want to leave. She wanted to stay. She wanted to take care of those poor little kids who were orphaned. But this was a great chance that she could feel family love again. She had to sacrifice her friends for a family and she did. She changed her surname to Hwang so now she was Hwang Jinae. But she regretted it leaving the orphanage as soon as she arrived her house. Sure, the family was rich. They owned most of Korea's five-star restaurants. Even the Lenovo computers. But the family wasn't the family she expected.

She had a god-damned lazy fat brother who tells her to do everything he wants instead of asking the maids. If you didn't want to do what he requested, he would beat you up. But the maids, butlers and bodyguards didn't try to stop him from hitting me. Why? Because he was stronger than all the staff. His name is Hwang Taeeun and he was 18 years old.

She had a y younger sister who was a show-off and a crybaby. Everytime when she walk her home from school or riding in the limo while she was crying, she'd blame her for not protecting her in school when she was the one who started the fight with the queenkas in school almost everyday. And I'd get beaten up by my mom instead of my dad. Her name was Hwang Joomin and she was 15 years old.

She had a mother who was as y as her sister. Not to mention . Sure, she was pretty and had an S-line, but that was her 'outside'. She only married your now new father because of his money. And after the day of the marriage she immediately went to sleep with another guy. She would sleep with another guy as long as he was rich. Her father didn't even knew about her affair. She would only be nice to her when the two family members are around. Her name was Kim Ina and she is in her early 40s.

She only had two family members who cared about her. Her father and her eldest brother. Her father would always ask the basic things a father would ask like, How was school? Did you get a new crush? Are you on that time of the month? Who's your newest bias? Is there a new concert coming? Okay, maybe that wasn't the basic things a father would ask, but maybe if you were a daddy's girl he would ask that. His name was Hwang Seounggyeong and he is in his mid 40s.

About her eldest brother, he would block her from that lazy- brother of yours from hitting you. He would accompany you when you were eating, grocery shopping, walking to school, riding the limo to school, protecting guys from hitting you or whatever. He was an overly protective brother. You really loved your older brother. His name was Hwang Taehoon and he was 20 years old.

What would happen if one day a guy came into her life and changed everything?

 

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"Thank you for coming to my life."

"No.. please, don't leave me.."

"I liked her first, so it doesn't give you the right to take her away from me!"

Foreword

© Copyright 2013; Crystie, All rights reserved
No printing or distribution allowed.
DO NOT PLAGARIZE!
I worked hard on this so you better not copy this fic or you'll see blood everywhere. I mean, everywhere.

The poster, background and character chart is made by 
  ☪ wolf 「feat. EXO」 → graphic shop's sunnyjjang

If you see a fic that has the same idea as mine it is just pure coincedence. (Unless they're the ones who copied it I'll give them a fist to the face)

It's my first ever fic so please don't bash me for my typos or if I have mispelling.


I changed the story title if you don't mind >.< 
(I was just kidding about the harsh things I said. But if you copy it, I WILL SKIN YOU ALIVE) 

Which reminds me... this fic is gonna be a long one~ It'll all be happy.... at first... o.o Yeah yeah.. its a sad fic and I edited this way too much.

 

Rules :
Oh, you don't like rules, well too bad XD kiddin' kiddin~

1. Do not plagarize, seriously, this is like the first thing you should do when writing stories.
2. Do not bash me! This is my first fic, once again. Also, English isn't my first language but I'm working on it.
3. I like ice-cream. In fact, I'm eating when you were reading this.
4. Comments are appreciated. When commenting, 'Update soon!' 'un-lazes' me, but do comment on what you think of the story.
5. Subscribe or no updates fo' you! XD 
6. I like chocolate milk. And whenever you are, or where you are, I'M DRINKING IT.

7. If someone dares to copy my fic, I hope you would all be loyal and report to me :D
8. Enjoy reading!

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ChunjiLover #1
Chapter 9: Awwwwww I love this!!!!! Update soon!!!!
BAP_YES_SIR #2
Chapter 9: Update please
Rainbowzjulia #3
Chapter 5: omg love this story <3 and minhyuk's firs love is the same person right? cute ^~^
minhyukswifey #4
Chapter 5: UPDATE!!! PLEASE!!!
KpopMisfits
#5
your summary is really good-description