Train (seconds that pass by)

Description

They barely knew each other, and yet, they're connected by heart.

Foreword

The line between strangers and friends is really close.

 

Information:

Title: Train (seconds that pass by)

Genre: slice of life, slight romance

Pairing: myungzy (myungsoo / suzy)

Contest Link / Prompt:  participating in "Welcome to our dream" contest | Prompt: Beautiful Stranger by Nell

Warnings:  /

a/n:

Thank you, delib, for hosting this contest, first of all, and secondly: the story takes (somehow) place in the year 2007. This story is pretty Suzy-centric.

Enjoy your read.

heartsparks

Author's Thoughts
ethereals
a bit of proofreading never hurts, right? ^^
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kurosakichi #1
Chapter 2: this is the cutest thing i've read tonight <3
i hope i'll have a cute dream too tonight when i fall asleep :')
sweetcide-r #2
Chapter 2: this is very heart warming. I'm not gonna ask for a sequel coz the sequel already happened in my mind---and could I just share with you, it was as amazing as how you have written this story. Thank you. For letting me experience such wonderful magic of writing.
mochisoo #3
Chapter 2: aah nice story, I love it !
I need sequel ;A;
adeeada #4
idk, but i love this story :) it's simple but enjoyable :D
doseokyeon #5
Chapter 2: IT'S SO PRETTY. But weird, I mean, you writing this fluffy thing. I just... never really expected this. It didn't end "badly" nor the way I thought it would (where they'd never actually talk but maybe smile at least or something, since it's you writing and I knew it wouldn't be a bad ending, I expected this). I liked it, though. I usually like angst (and expect that more when it's about you), but this was really beautiful. I was smiling the whole time from the start to the end, and I loved the "Lee Sungyeol stupid" part! It just... gave a huge light to the whole plot where those two didn't know each other, and Myungsoo could've been any kind of a murderer, but somehow knowing that he still had his bff Sungyeol made everything more... safe, I guess. The end bothered me, because it's so, uhm, blunt? Noh. Stiff, maybe. It's nice, though. It actually fits well, hahah. You did well again. Goodbye.
sulli111 #6
This is beautiful :')
farabigail #7
Chapter 2: sequeeelll pleaseeeeeeeee
myungzy<3
patheticdoll #8
Chapter 2: oh my god this is wonderful. I love how you describe Suzy's feeling, and it's almost like I can feel what she felt. I'm so glad in the end she managed to engage in conversation with Myungsoo. Overall, it's a really great story :D
SkullMaki #9
Chapter 2: AAAAAAAAAAAAW SO SWEET <3 i like it
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