Forever and Always

Description

This oneshot was inspired by the song Forever and Always by Parachute. Enjoy!

Credits to exoticparadise for this awesome poster!

Foreword

I sighed in relief when I saw the two headlights from a cab approach me. “To the General Hospital. Please hurry.” The tone in my voice was filled with anxiety and the driver nodded silently before speeding towards the hospital. I didn’t really believe in supernatural beings that control the fate of people, but for the first time in my life, I linked my hands together, bowed my head and prayed. To whoever’s hearing this, just let him be okay. Just let him be okay. Just let him be okay.

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ikin12 #1 Dec 5, 2013 10:41:04

Chapter 1: No.....i read this with their new song 'miracle of december' and i really don't know what to say! Short words, my tears are like waterfall and not stop yet..
why, luhan? If it's real then i will die right now, i can't take it! TT

AleenaCakes #2 Jul 12, 2013 13:34:55

Chapter 1: Noo Luhan why you you only gave me that stupid ring I WUNTT CHUU ;(((

jwhong005 #3 Jun 30, 2013 11:08:16

Chapter 1: the only thing, really, is that in either the first or second paragraph you wrote she redid her 'make up' while what you wanted was 'makeup'. it's one of those things that makes the english language a bother to learn.

later on you had sehun and the girl talking in the same paragraph without a break. a new paragraph is formed for each new person talking. also, when luhan apologizes for what happened, there isn't any punctuation between the dialogue and the quotation mark.

otherwise, it was pretty on key with the whole 'angst' theme. i really did think that the title was a cliche up until i read that this is based off a song. songs tend to have a cliche feel because you can only think of so many song titles before they start to become reused and whatnot. so i would recommend this to someone if they were looking for something quick (as in, not a chaptered story) to read.