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Thank you so much for the support ; this was my first stroy ever ; and you gave all the love needed ; thank you

I might write a SEQUEL ; idk for sure ; it depends on what you guys want !

and befriend me on AFF dw ; i accept all the requests

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lolitta #1 Jan 26, 2014 10:00:57

it's really sad how this story was really short that it felt lacking so much more emotions and events ! you have a great pot line and potential !
why don't you think of re-writing it again but in a longer more detailed version ? i think that would be so cool

triciaanne #2 Jul 3, 2013 18:56:58

Chapter 6: Yeaaah! Please make a sequel d(^_^)b

kikieunhae #3 Jul 3, 2013 14:01:25

Chapter 5: glad they are together now!!!
i reallu loved reading this fic so...thanKYU ^^

daya219 #4 Jul 2, 2013 21:36:58

Chapter 6: I love your plot story but i felt that something was missing i know it was for the contest so you couldnt do it longer but i would love to read a pre sequel =)

de_cieluv #5 Jul 2, 2013 20:25:24

Chapter 6: Awwww.... They have kid.... >_< I want sequel as long as its happy ending and eunhae tagged on it >_<

cloudye0705 #6 Jul 2, 2013 19:34:23

Chapter 6: Simple stry and love it,,
Maybe you can make it better with using paragraph,,that's make your readers to won't get confused,,

Ladyghai #7 Jul 2, 2013 18:38:23

Chapter 5: I really like the story line, but next time when you write one try to be more descriptive and use some paragraphs :) but this story is so cute :)

0-0anon0-0 #8 Jul 2, 2013 16:27:00

Chapter 6: Aww, the story line was really sweet. For your first story this is actually pretty good. I have one suggestion though, I hope in the future with your writing you'll be a little more descriptive, since this story seemed to jump from one place to another. Your story was cute. Good job, thank you author-nim! :D