Chapter 1: Very nicely done!! I personally loved it.
I find it quite hard to find story that are not only tells about romance between the characters but also actually have a plot.
So two tumbs up for you darling!! Looking forward to read your other stories.
Chapter 1: he's so awkward i love him even more HAHAHA this is really sweet :')))) ever considered writing a spinoff for jin and chan? :D hahaha just saying xD
AND YES OMG I NEVER KNEW HOW TO SAY GEOG, HISTORY, AND LIT IN CHINESE OMG
Chapter 1: this was really nice to read! the way you described their relationship and how sunwoo was before and after went over really well. and their dynamics too - cnu being all henpecked (ok obedient), jinyoung the reckless playboy with no clue of poor chansik, and of course sunwoo and junghwan. i loved your junghwan with his sharp tongue (lol the insult he threw kyung made me laugh!) and sunwoo's awkwardness.
write more! :)
haha omg the 地震 reminds me of when i was in school and there was a geography question asking us to name a techtonic plate and my friend wrote "hot plate". ok nt funny :/
Chapter 1: This story is sooo good :-)
Really, why are you writing that you can't do any AU when your writing is so extrardinary good!
And I really like that this isn't the typical story since they are together since the beginning. It was nice to read about their relationship.
I also love the characters. They just seem to be so natural and aren't a bit awkward.
I loved Sandeuls and Jihos argument about Baro and the whole idea with Baros odd behaviour was good, because this is how many people are at the beginning of a relationship.
If you not sure if you should make this into an whole fic, then I would tell you to please do it, because this is awesome and I want to know if Gongchan will end up with Jinyoung <3
Chapter 1: This story is just amazing as all your other works, and it had be drowning in a sea of fluff. Really, this is awesome stuff. I can't believe Jinyoung is such a player, but your characterisation really is on point so there's a big tick for you. The AU world was set up nicely, with their studying and history, and I LOVE the Block B cameo you put in.
...Now go practice some more by writing a continuation for Jinyoung and Gongchan! =P
But really, you have nothing to worry about: this is written really well. <3
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