Feeling Faint

Description

Cold sweat.

Blurred eyesight.

Heavy breathing.

Feeling faint.

"You're just tired."

"It's fatigue."

"You're overworked."

Youngjae had always been too diligent and strong to fall ill.

It was only cold symptoms, right?

Daehyun couldn't tell.

His hope and his instinctive logic were battling against one another in a hopeless war, making his mind whir too fast to even contemplate the idea of taking action. He was too scared.

He knew something would go wrong.

It would only be a matter of days until everything slipped out of control.

Foreword

I haven't written any B.A.P fics, and this idea kinda jumped up from nowhere, and I really wanted to write it.

So, here we go.

Please excuse this pathetic excuse of a description here *sigh*

I'm terrible at writing anything tear-jerking, but be prepared for an...attempt at something depressing.

This may or may not include character death.

This will not contain large amounts of romance between Daehyun and Youngjae. i'm sorry :c

I really hope you guys will enjoy this oneshot, please, do subscribe and show your support, it makes me jump out of my seat :D I won't let you down :)

Please don't forget to leave your feedback once I've updated, constructive criticism and your opinions are much appreciated, as well as your supportive comments xoxoxo <3

Thank you in advance, to every supporter I gain! I'll update this A.S.A.P ^^

Love, Ellie :)

edit: please check out this blog post for information on the plagiarism issue. thank you tokyotiffo314 for pointing it out, i appreciate it so much <3

MintyPetals
i would like to publicly thank user tokyotiffo314 for pointing out a plagiarism issue. more info in the foreword.

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BTSFanGirl469
#1
Chapter 1: I'm in science class and I almost started crying. That would not be good.
BTSFanGirl469
#2
Chapter 1: I actually might start crying...
YukariStarzYjae
#3
Chapter 1: Damn..i literally cying here *cries*(╥﹏╥)..although it totally sad,im happy they are together at last...gahhh...im crying again *cries at the corner*..dont touch me..im in emo mode..imma cries for a bit *whines loudly* ( TДT)
BAPfeel5ogood06 #4
Chapter 1: I've read this last time and I almost cried, cos I know that Jae was Dae's only best friend when he first came to Seoul and into BAP. It's hard to see that they lost each other, it's so sadddd ㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠ
CherryLovesRainbows
#5
Chapter 1: You have no idea how mch I cried reading this, amazing job author-nim!
seoulsunshine
#6
Chapter 1: Ohmaig.... this was beautiful and depressing
aznbean
#7
Chapter 1: You are an amazing and truly gifted writer...
I hope you become well known for this and everything that you have written!!!
I LOVE you!
BabySkypeia126 #8
Chapter 1: Tho I like this kind of story but... I really really wish for something like this to never happened... T.T
Youngjae is too cute to suffer like that also daehyun... they should live healthily n happily forever.......