Chapter 1: awwww... this is sad but true. I would love to read more of this 'true self' type of stories (though i think i'll just probably write Jinki or Henry more than any other idol)

you did great on this authornim!

Chapter 1: Poor Jonghyun bby :c
I can't imagine how difficult it is to be a Kpop idol & have to act a certain way to keep a perfect image. but like everyone else they're human too with fears, anger, and bad qualities of their personalities. I wish people understood that. And just because they're idols doesn't make them any less human than everyone else. /sigh/
Regardless, this was really good~ I loved it c: You're a really good writer, keep it up! ^^