It Was My Mistake (내가 잘못 했어요)

Description

Jiyeon lives an ordinary life, juggling between school and working part-time at a cafe. But everything changes when she mets a handsome young man at a subway station who kept stealing her cookies. She is given the opportunity to work with the popular idol male group, MBLAQ. Soon enough, to her surprise, she finds out the boy she met on the subway station resembles Lee Joon, a member of MBLAQ. Along the way, both Jiyeon and Joon find themelves developing feelings for each other. However they are unsure whether the feelings are mutual. With MBLAQ in Jiyeon's life, she learns the importance of love, friendship, and to strive for her dreams, no matter what it takes.

 

I was inspired by the ever so popular short story, "The Cookie Thief" by Valerie Cox.

The story will develop as I write since I don't really know what I'm doing, as it's actually my first time writing a fanfic. Ever.

Anyways, I hope you enjoy! I apologize in advance for any errors or typos.

Foreword

"How many times in our lives, 
have we absolutely known
that something was a certain way,
only to discover later that
what we believed to be true ... was not?"

 

Characters:

  

Park Jiyeon 18 years old. A kind-hearted, naive, yet stubborn girl. Although she's clumsy at times, she can kick your if you piss her off. She didn't get a black belt in TaeKwondo for nothing! Her first impression of Joon wasn't the best, but she soon develops ambivalent feelings for him. However she is unsure of whether to show him how she feels in fear of ruining his career.

 

  

Lee Joon 23 years old. A member of MBLAQ who has a strong passion for dancing. He's hard-working, but sometimes overworks himself. Off-stage, he's a fun person to be around and has a very likeable personality. But on-stage, he easily charms with his charismatic and powerful performance. Extremely cute when he wants to be. When he's mad, he stays very quiet and prefers to isolate himself. Still has some feelings for Hyomin. He starts to like Jiyeon but thinks that Jiyeon dislikes him and is uninterested in him.

 

  

Lee Jieun 18 years old. Jiyeon's best friend who works with her at Haneul Cafe. She also goes to the same school as Jiyeon, so they are basically always with each other. Jieun's a very patient, sweet girl who believes someday, love will come for her when the time is ready.

 

 

MBLAQ A popular male idol group in South Korea under the management of J.tune Camp

Yang Seungho 24 years old. The oldest and leader of the group with a usual calm, reserved personalty. He's well-respected withing the group by his dongsaengs. But when he doesn't get his way, he sometimes whines and oozes with aegyo.

G.O (Jung Byunghee) 24 years old. The fun, random, gentleman of the group who's good at giving advice to his dongsaengs. His dorky personality contrasts with his smooth, soft vocals.

Cheondung (Park Sanghyun) 21 years old. The tall, prince-like member with model looks. He's very sweet, clever, and considerate of others, but is also sneaky and likes to tease the other members when given the chance. 

Mir (Bang Cheolyong) 20 years old. The cute, playful, loud maknae of the group. Often bullied by his hyungs, but of course, out of love. His friendliness makes it easy for him to get along with others quickly.

 

  

Park Hyomin 22 years old. A beautiful, sweet, kind-hearted model and actress. Once rumored to have dated Joon. Unaware that Joon still has feelings for her.

 

  

Kim Hyuna 18 years old. A pretty but rude girl who enjoys bullying Jiyeon and Jieun. She was once best friends with Jiyeon and Jieun in middle school, but started ignoring them since their first high school year. Her reason for ending the friendship is a mystery.

 


 

I'll update this when I add in more characters. ^^

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satrina7 #1
Chapter 8: owww no new chapters :(
KibummieWaifu
#2
CONTINUE TT.TT
KibummieWaifu
#3
love love love it <3
KibummieWaifu
#4
love love love it <3
bluesrgent
#5
love it .
Secretmoonlight
#6
Uh....the end...? :(
paroxysmx #7
I WAS SO SHOCKED/SCREAMED/DIED<br />
i love this fic D:<br />
but..ill support the new one :D
Lola123 #8
aww :(
maknaes4eva
#9
I really like this storyline :( I hope your next fanfic will be just as good or even better :)
asianstorylover #10
:( I like this concept:(( I on the good side ur writing a new one^^ thnx hehe