Chapter 2: My dear readers and subscribers, sorry if the sequel seemed a bit rushed. *bows apologetically* Don't worry, I'l work harder and do better next time *wide grin* Fighting! *fist pump* KEKEKE! Still, I'am very grateful that you still spared this story of mine some of your precious time. KOMAPTA CHINGU-JJANG!!! XD
nice and smooth enough is what i could say about the first chap. The lyris and the way you write in chap 1 was good. You can make readers sympathy with Tae. That's your sucess. but comparing to chap 1, I think chap 2 was less atractive. May be it seems too abrupt? Anyway, I like happy ending. You are good!
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