The Three Wishes

Description

[YOUR POV]:

I opened my heavy eyelids and noticed that I am standing in the middle of the road, cars driving pass me. To be more specific, cars are driving pass through me, my body. *HOW IS THAT POSSIBLE?* I was freaked out. I looked down at the muddle of murky water and I can't see my own reflection. This is mad. It must be all fake. It must be a dream. I tried to slap myself, hoping it won't hurt, but the reality is that it really hurts.. I saw a commotion beside me with people crowding there.. I walked over and find myself lying down there, bleeding profusely. OMFG.

FLASHBACK

It's Gongchan's birthday. I went to the famous "Tous les Jours" cake shop. It's famous among kids which made me chuckled at the thought of remembering Gongchan is still a kid in my eyes. I bought the buttercream mickey mouse cake; the top-selling cake in their shop. *I hope Gongchan will like it.* I thought and smiled at myself as I walked along the road. I spotted an old lady across the road with unkempt hair, a lump on her back, placing her left hand behind her waist, trying to bend down and picked the cans that people threw on up. I ran over to help her to pick the cans as well. *Finally, someone is here.* The old lady smiled at herself. I bid farewell to the old lady as she waved at me after helping her, doing a good deed. Oblivious to the oncoming cars due to earpieces in my ears, I walked backwards as I waved back to the old lady with my eye-smile. She tried to warn me but in vain. It was too late. A car lost its control and drove towards me unwillingly with full speed and knocked me down. I was bleeding prufosely. The driver was unconscious too....

END OF FLASHBACK

I tried to walk around the people that are crowding me - the me that is lying unconsciously on the floor. I walked around, tried to wave and talk to them but to no avail. Nobody knows my prescence. I sighed. *Am I going to be like that; in this condition for the rest of my 'life'?* I was schocked as I saw an old lady walking towards me.. It was the old lady I helped previously, before I got into the accident... She stared at me with those unpredictable eyes... *Can she see me?* 

 

CHARACTERS: 

Jinyoung (Gongchan's sunbae in school):

 

Gongchan (Your [younger] brother): 

 

AND NONETHELESS, YOU/MIYEON. 

*YOUR OWN PICTURE*

 

Foreword

Hello everyone ^^. This is my second fanfic and I hope I have improved from my first fanfic featuring N and Eunyoung. Nonetheless, please take a look at it :) --> http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/407691/falling-in-love-hiatus-romance-vixx-hakyeon-twox-eunyoung-vixxn-nyoung

This fanfic I have decided to make Jinyoung the main character :$ I hope my story is improving one by one :) I hope this description can spark your interest :) Subscribe to this story! ^^ Thanks for reading. >)

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chocolategirl
#1
Chapter 3: Barom made that girl prego!!! Jinyoung and Miyeon are meant to be XD
JeffJeff
#2
haha, ooo, sounds interesting so far!
inspiritedfriend
#3
Chapter 1: Why does Jinyoung sound evil hahahhaha xD jkjk