Chapter 1: i love it! are you going to continue? please!

it aint to fluffy sounds interesting......post more soon ^_^

love this fic :) i could really picture what was happening... like, perfectly. really well written too. write moree!!!!

@ eunhyuk-love : AHHHHHH!!!! thank you!!!! :D :D i admit it kinda discouraged me from writing another one, but who knows, now i might :D <br />
as for the writing, it's the standard of how i'm supposed to write in my school, and the books i read are like this, so i didn't think that it was complicated, but thank you for pointing that out. I'll try to write less...complicated? :/<br />
as for you, you're a great writer too. It isn't fair to compare any two writers, because we all have different styles, so no one's better than anyone, k? :)

though me compared to you......you're much better. much, much better. (get more views man!!!) its brilliant!

nice!!! its very well written story, its really great! but the thing is, many people wouldn't get what is going on since its so well written (but i read books for adults so i got it) maybe if your writing was a little *simplified* but wow you should be an author!!!!!