Chapter 6: otl i'm sorry for not commenting lately.
anyways, the story seems a bit messy (?)
because they're like fourteen members and it's virtually impossible to write a paragraph that focuses on them.
and the maknae line doesn't seem to interact as much as the leader line o n o;

thanks for taking the time to update!
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Chapter 6: i'm so sorry it took me so long to comment D:
Ryu is so cuteee!! :333 hehe i'm pretty sure i've said this before xP and omg his hatred for bananas xD
about the game Ryu and Hyunmin are playing.... ouch >< i play games like this is school, but we don't slap each other on the cheek. we'd just slap the back of the hand. haha. i pity the make-up artists xP
awww, the fansign was cute~ hehe :D lol is grandpa dan gonna become minkwang's nickname around the dorm now?? :P
hmm... are ryu and hyunmin gonna become an otp??? ^^ lol xD
"carrots terrify me" xDDDD i love this line hahhaha xD

Chapter 6: oh! and the website is cool! i like it :3

Chapter 6: i love them already :)
it does sound a bit chaotic... but i wouldn't expect everything to flow correctly with 14 different members and personalities .___. especially at the beginning.
but the fanservice! i like how jaemin is in most of those, hahahaha.
and do i need to even mention ryu and his hatred for bananas? probably not~ haha ><

Chapter 6: omg all the interaction in here is priceless
and all the fanservice my god
there's just so much to pick up on i can't even

LOL!! Ryu's so cute with his hatred for bananas~

Chapter 6: This chapter is cool!!
All member have great interaction with each other.

Chapter 6: Little baby Ryu hates bananas! If he doesn't eat healthy foods, he won't get big and strong like Grandp Dan!
All the members appear to be meshing very well with each other, albeit they're a little violent with one another, but it's sort of cute in a way. They will definitely perform well together too!