Teardrops In The Rain

Description

I like rain.

I like it when it rains.

My life can be compared to rain-the dark clouds,the never-ending downpour of the raindrops,the sadness and darkness.

Then one day,sunlight broke through those clouds,ceasing the never-ending rain...even for just a while.

He was literally the sunshine in my life.Call it corny if you must but he really is.His words made me lift my head with hope.

"Park Chun Hei,daughter of a killer,let's be friends."

He was the first person to offer me friendship.I had never felt so happy in my life.

But of couse good things don't last.

Li Jiaheng,as I said before, you were the one who put an end to the downpour of rain in my heart.

But how could you forget me so easily?

Foreword

Characters

The Park Siblings

 

Park Chun Hei (The Forgotten Girl)

-17 years old

-Daughter of a murderer.

-Treated with fear and disrespect,due to her father's crime.

-Actually a shy and warm-hearted person.She's also clumsy and has a habit of stuttering when she's nervous.

-Treasures a hair pin given to her by her childhood best friend.

-Her first love and best friend is Li Jiaheng(Kris).

 

Park Chanyeol (The Overprotective Brother)

-17 years old

-Chun Hei's biological twin brother.

-Known as derpy, but is warm-hearted and overprotective of his twin,Chun Hei.

-Member of the group EXO.

-Treats the Choi siblings like a real family,even though the oldest of them doesn't.

-One of the few people who believes that his father is innocent;But later hates him when he came to know about his father's abusive nature towards Chun Hei.

 

Choi Soo Min (The Rebel and Ever-Supporting Best Friend...and Stepsister)

-17 years old

-Daughter of Police Chief Officer Kim Gun-Woo

-Chun-Hei's stepsister and best friend.

-Became Chun-Hei's friend when she covered up for her.

-A complete rebel.She likes to be bossy but is awkward in expressing her true feelings.

-Has a crush on Sehun,but tries to hide it by teasing him about his lisp(which she secretly finds adorable).

 

EXO

 

Li Jiaheng/Wu Yifan/Kris (The Boy Who Forgot)

-17 years old

-Son of a rich businessman,heir to Wu Corporations

-Has amnesia due to a car accident 3 years ago.

-Business-minded.He's a bit cold but once people get to know him,he warms up and cares for them...a lot.

-Thinks that Chun Hei is an annoying girl who usually bothers him and keeps calling him Li Jiaheng.

-Recently having dreams of a certain girl that he doesn't know...but somehow looks a lot like Chun Hei.

 

Kim Jongin/Kai (The Second Ray of Hope/The Friendzoned Admirer)

-17 years old

-Sarcastic and bossy,but is cares a lot for his friends;Is awkward when it comes to expressing his feelings.

-Is passionate when it comes to dancing.

-People in school call him ' God' (even though he hasn't slept with anyone) due to his flirty nature.

-Is forever friendzoned by Chun Hei.

-Has romatic feelings towards Chun Hei.

 

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Oh Sehun (The Stepsister's Object of Affection)

-17 years old

-Despite his cold exterior,he can be a sociable person who can do aegyo.

-Has an adorable lisp.

-Best friend with Lu Han.

-Has romantic feelings for Soo Min.

-Absolutely adores Bubble Tea!

Huang Zitao

-17 years old

-Kris's best friend

-Might look scary,but is actually shy and cute.

-He likes Gucci.

-Due to his love for martial arts(namely Wushu) and his eyebags,he is nicknamed 'KungFu Panda'.

-He likes to do aegyo and uses it to get what he wants.

 

Byun Baekhyun

-17 years old

-Chanyeol's best friend.

-Acts like a 5-year old sometimes.

-Can be y too straightforward.In other words,he is blunt.

-Likes eyeliner.Too much.

-Can play the piano and do hapkido.

Do Kyungsoo/D.O.

-17 years old

-Kai's best friend.

-The group's Umma.

-Is nice and motherly,but will kick anyone who dares to step in his kitchen(with the exception of Lay as he can also cook).

 

 

Lu Han

-17 years old

-Famous for his friendly attitude.

-Sehun's best friend

-Will kick anyone who sits on his bed.

Kim Joonmyeon/Suho

-17 years old

-Called 'grandpa' by the group.

-Is the peacemaker in the group.

Zhang Yixing/Lay

-17 years old

-Is often forgetful,but makes up for it with his nice smile.

-The group's second Umma.

Kim Jongdae/Chen

-17 years old

-XiuMin's partner-in-crime.

-Loves to troll.

Kim Minseok/XiuMin

-17 years old

-Chen's partner-in crime.

-Doesn't like his nickname 'Baozi' but got used to it.

 

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Hey guys!The character list is soooo long!(That's because I had too much fun in doing it^_^")

So yeah...the stupid me has suddenly decided to write a fanfic 0_o I really don't know what possesed me to do this thing.

Anyway,this is my first fanfic:)

So please don't be too harsh!

So thank you for those who have the time to view it:)

I'll try to update!Promise!

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Edit (Again)

I'm really sorry!*bows apologetically*

I edited the character list again 0_o

It's just that my reader (who is my cousin) complained that there are too many characters>.< Sooo...yeah...

 

 

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RealisticOptimist
#1
I was going to put this critique as a Private Message, but your profile was set to private, so I'll just post it here:)

1. Please add spaces between punctuation marks like the period, comma, or semicolon. It's proper grammar and proper grammar helps make your story look much more polished:)

2. This sounds A LOT like the drama "I Miss You" starring Micky Yoochun, Yoon Eun Hye, and Yoo Seung Ho. You could be inspired by the drama, but if your fic's plotline follows the drama's too much, you're looking into unoriginality:/

3. I'll enjoy the story:) it doesn't sound bad♥