One Coo Too Many

Description

Eli stared wistfully at the pictures of Ukiss’s debut.  He remembered Alexander’s pep talk, Kevin’s stage fright, Dongho’s whining, and his own nervousness like it was yesterday.  But things had changed with the member addition, Kiseop.  Suddenly, there were more things to worry about and more things to practice, but there were also more memories that Eli would never give up.

Now there were no more pep talks.  No more random English conversations.  No more Japanese lessons.  

And all Eli could do about it was coo.

Foreword

This is officially my second challenge from MusicChibi, and I decided that I would try to write a Ukiss oneshot this time.  

Ukiss has caught my eye with their unique style of music.  Their overly autotuned songs attracted me to them, for I had not heard anything like that before in the world of Kpop.  Also, I heard that they are wonderful people to meet, and they are very kind and friendly.  And they are multilingual.  So if I ever met them in the street somewhere and wanted to say ‘hello’, I wouldn’t have to bust out my insanely awkward Korean.

I created the poster for this oneshot, which is why it isn’t as good as the ones you find at the various poster request shops on the site.

I’ve seen Eli’s pigeon act many times, and I have to say that this MusicChibi challenge intrigues me.  I’m ready to undergo the constructive criticism once again and improve my writing skills as a whole.

Feel free to leave your opinion in the comments box after the official oneshot is posted, and thank you for reading!

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ilovekpop81897 #1
super sweet :3
Whimsical_Princess #2
Chapter 1: So sweet and sad
bluepearl13
#3
omg this is really cute and sweet
i miss xander and kibum T___T
ekaaputri10 #4
waw, nice story.. :D <br />
just so sweet >.<<br />
i missed xander and kibum already >.<
fruitybanana #5
whoa, i really liked this! :o<br />
i subscribed too, even though its a oneshot LOL
Woonies_Noona #6
This was really really good. I actually cried so that's when I know it's a good fic lol. Keep up the great work!
ilovekpop81897 #7
kay dongsaeng, i just want to say that this is probably one of the better things you've written. no lies. and it was a musicchibi challenge? damn, should i do one? i've heard of those~<br />
anyway, hope to see more from you. what are you planning in that silly little mind of yours?
freespiritxj #8
Very cute! I enjoyed it! :)
Infinitewoohyunlover
#9
sweet and cute story<br />
littlepenguins
#10
Love the story! <3 ^_^