Chapter 1: why do you like to ____ enter button so much? because of that story looks bad. there's too much dialogue and only a little description. also, there's no need to write "hahaha" (actually, writing "hahaha" in dialogue unacceptable) if you later write "he laughed".
and worst thing - WHY hyesung calls eric, minwoo and dongwan "hyung"? they are same age friends, they don't call each other like that.
keep working hard and be better in the future.
fighting!
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